Thoughtless

I just made it up like right now so please tell me what you think. Whether you like it or not please leave a comment and not just skip it please!!! Oh and the Gerard way picture was an inspiration and no I’m not stealing his concept…he's awesome in his own way…hope you like it.
Thoughtless
Try to hold up that smile
Think it's only meanwhile
Nothing will last forever
Never thought we'd be together

The end is sad not happy true
Nothing is joyful always blue
I don't care what you said
Seeing you, is me being dead

The angels are screaming
The want me to start leaving
Paradise rejection, as is well
New resting place hell

Resting place bed of nails
Surrounded by bar hand jails
Food carved from stone
Every person show their bone

Bloody hands, normal race
Breathing hard, slow pace
Disturbing life of a sinner
Well not really, he's winner.

By Karen Sanchez
Published: 9/9/2007
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