Their First Kiss

Read it, first poem I ever wrote...
Their breath ragged
Hearts entwined as one
Trying to steady their breathing
but never quite succeeding
she closes her eyes
They know what's coming
he kisses her softly
her heart skips a beat
she'd finally had her first kiss

Was is it any good?
Yeah
Nope
Dunno
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