The Wrong Side of the Track Ch. 19
sorry it took so long my brother left with my notebook that had the story in it and took it all the way to another city, but here it is. Please comment also sorry about the length very long.
"The limos here" my dad shouted
We all gave each other a look over to make sure we looked ok. The first person we picked up was Dawson. Then we headed to pick Janelle up because jasmine wasn’t going her and Derek was still fighting I guess. When Janelle got in I introduced her to everyone and a few minutes later we pulled up to the hotel. Outside stood at least a hundred screaming teens. Katie and Dawson got out first then Derek and Janelle and lastly me and Marcus. When I got out the crowd started screaming my name and wishing me happy birthday. When I reached the doors of the hotel my parents pulled them open for us. My mom stared at me and Marcus in disgust her look hurt almost to the point of tears. I guess Marcus saw the look on my face cause her entwined his fingers in mine and gave my hand a kiss. All six of us walked on stage and the hotel coordinator handed me the mic to speech to the rowdy crowd.
"I just wanna thank you guys for coming to my party and all I have to say is let’s get this party started"
Soon the DJ blasted loud music out the speakers and people from the crowd rushed on stage to dance with us. The six of us stayed in our own little world only dancing with each other. After a couple of hours I got tired and thirsty so I excused myself from the group. Marcus being a wonderful boyfriend offered to get it for me but I declined and headed for the back of the room towards the bar. As I passed through the crowd I saw Tess and amber I guess our little bathroom brawl didn’t discourage them from coming to my party. When I reached the bar I sat down and the barkeep came out from the back room.
"can I help you" the barkeep asked
"yeah uh a sprite please"
"anything for you birthday girl" he gave me a wink and walked in the backroom
"I think he was flirting with you" a familiar voice said from behind me
"nah he was just being nice" I said shyly as I realized whose voice it was tony sat next to me and gave me a little smile I felt butterflies in my stomach.
"You look beautiful tonight" he said as he caressed my face I blushed and turned away. i can’t stand myself why did I let him have this power over me I don’t want to get butterflies in my stomach I want it to churn in disgust from his face, I don’t want to blush at him I want to turn red with anger. He leaned in to kiss me when the barkeep came a gave me my drink I let out a little sigh saved by the barkeep was all I could think to myself.
"Thank you" I got up to leave but tony grabbed me by my wrist and pulled me to the side.
"Have you been thinking about my offer?"
"Uh yeah Tony I can’t be with you"
"what" he shouted as his grip on my wrist tightened
"Tony I cant put up with your anger anymore and I just can’t deal with you"
"I’ve changed you know that"
"Tony it’s the same old song and dance with you, you say you’ve changed but you never do"
"Well let me prove that I have"
"Tony I can’t"
"Why not"
"Because that’s not the only reason I don’t wanna be with you anymore"
"What’s that suppose to mean"
"I love someone else" I slightly whispered
"What did you say"
"I love someone else tony" when I said this his grip tightened even more and I let out a slight yelp
"Tony let me go"
"No"
"Please tony please just let me go your hurting me"
"Let her go" Marcus said walking up behind tony
"oh please don’t tell me this is who your in love with" tony said the last part in a sarcastic tone
"let my girl go"
"oh your girl huh" tony let my wrist go and I could see a bruise where he was holding me I tried to run towards Marcus but tony stopped me. Marcus stepped closer to tony and curled his hand into a fist.
"move" Marcus commanded tony but he didn’t listen
"what you gonna do about it"
"I ain’t playing with you home boy ill kick yo ass get out her way"
"Tony if you don’t leave now ill call security"
"Whatever" tony said as he walked out the hotel
I just stood there staring at Marcus who still looked angry. He grabbed my hand and lead me outside. When we got outside he paced back in forth in front of me he was angry scratch that he was fuming.
"I was watching you’ll the whole time you let him just caress you and you almost let him kiss you"
"Marcus-"
"no let me finish all I'm saying is if I'm wasting my time tell me now cause im really putting myself out there for you shawty and I just wanna make sure the feelings are mutual"
"Marcus the feelings are mutual he’s my past and for a long time he was my everything and its hard to move on from that but I am because I know that you’re my future" I said as a few tears escaped my eyes. Marcus walked up to me and wiped the tears away from my eyes and gave me a kiss on forehead. I nestled my head in his neck and he held me tight.
"I love you" he whispered in my ear I pulled away from him and looked him in his gorgeous eyes.
"I love you too"
"I got you a present"
"Marcus you didn’t have to do that"
"I wanted to shawty"
Marcus pulled out a small ring box and my heart skipped a beat. When he opened it he reveled a heart shaped diamond on a silver band.
"Marcus I-"
"calm down shawty its not a engagement ring or anything" I let out a slight sigh but of disappointment I think Marcus realized this so he continued " I got something better planned for that" he gave me a wink and a smile.
"its gorgeous Marcus" I said as he slide it on my finger
"it use to be my moms diamond is my birthstone and she use to always say I ways say I was her heart hence the heart shaped diamond"
"oh my gosh Marcus I can’t"
"I want you too" he said as he gave me a kiss soon the kiss intensified as his tongue entered my mouth but the intense kiss was cut short as we heard fake coughs come from behind us.
"We been looking all over for you’ll" Katie yelled
"Its time to cut the cake" Derek said as he grabbed my arm and pulled me into the hotel up on the stage. The cake was gorgeous I picked it out weeks ago and I was still in awe as it was rolled in front of me. The large crowd all began singing happy birthday when they finished I closed my eyes and blew out the candles. I didn’t make a wish I already had everything I wanted a great boyfriend and wonderful friends. My mom handed me the cake cutter when I reached for it she saw the ring and I heard her let out a little gasp.
I cut six slices for me and the rest of my friends and the caters took the rest to distribute amongst the guest. I and Derek’s parents left around eleven because there flight left at midnight. The party ended around one all six of us piled back into the limo. We dropped Katie and Dawson at Dawson’s house and they both exited with a devilish grin on their face. Next we dropped Janelle off and she gave me a big hug and wished me a happy birthday. Derek fell asleep in the limo and me and Marcus just stared and laughed at him.
"anywhere else ma’am" the driver said
"yeah church and drexell" Marcus said
Soon we pulled up in front of the small lake Marcus took me before.
"did you have a happy birthday"
"I did thank you"
"I love you Audrey"
"I love you too Marcus"
He gave me a small kiss as he went to pull away I pulled him back into me. After a long breathless kiss we pulled apart and stared at each other in the eyes. I grabbed his hand and lead him back to the limo and told the driver to take us home. When we got to the house we woke Derek up and he went straight to his bedroom. Me and Marcus just stood at the door staring at each other. Then he wrapped his arm around my waist and pulled me into a kiss. I slowly walked backwards into the house and Marcus kicked the door shut without breaking our kiss. After we reached the stairs we finally pulled apart and I lead Marcus up to my room. When we got in the room he slowly laid me down on the bed kissing my lips then my neck and then my bare shoulder. I began to take off his jacket and slowly unbuttoned his shirt reveling a very chiseled and absolutely gorgeous body. He sat up and finished taking off his shirt. I turned my back to him gesturing for him to unzip my dress. As he unzipped my dress he slowly caressed my back sending chills through my spine. He continued to kiss my neck and then down to my breast I never felt as good as I did right then. I pulled at Marcus belt and zipper and he finished pulling my dress down. I had never wanted anyone as much as I wanted Marcus right now. He stared me in the eyes and gave me a kiss on my lips.
"I love you"
"I love you too"
Soon I was in heaven I felt nothing but pure ecstasy I never had anyone please me the way Marcus was and if possible I loved him even more know.
We all gave each other a look over to make sure we looked ok. The first person we picked up was Dawson. Then we headed to pick Janelle up because jasmine wasn’t going her and Derek was still fighting I guess. When Janelle got in I introduced her to everyone and a few minutes later we pulled up to the hotel. Outside stood at least a hundred screaming teens. Katie and Dawson got out first then Derek and Janelle and lastly me and Marcus. When I got out the crowd started screaming my name and wishing me happy birthday. When I reached the doors of the hotel my parents pulled them open for us. My mom stared at me and Marcus in disgust her look hurt almost to the point of tears. I guess Marcus saw the look on my face cause her entwined his fingers in mine and gave my hand a kiss. All six of us walked on stage and the hotel coordinator handed me the mic to speech to the rowdy crowd.
"I just wanna thank you guys for coming to my party and all I have to say is let’s get this party started"
Soon the DJ blasted loud music out the speakers and people from the crowd rushed on stage to dance with us. The six of us stayed in our own little world only dancing with each other. After a couple of hours I got tired and thirsty so I excused myself from the group. Marcus being a wonderful boyfriend offered to get it for me but I declined and headed for the back of the room towards the bar. As I passed through the crowd I saw Tess and amber I guess our little bathroom brawl didn’t discourage them from coming to my party. When I reached the bar I sat down and the barkeep came out from the back room.
"can I help you" the barkeep asked
"yeah uh a sprite please"
"anything for you birthday girl" he gave me a wink and walked in the backroom
"I think he was flirting with you" a familiar voice said from behind me
"nah he was just being nice" I said shyly as I realized whose voice it was tony sat next to me and gave me a little smile I felt butterflies in my stomach.
"You look beautiful tonight" he said as he caressed my face I blushed and turned away. i can’t stand myself why did I let him have this power over me I don’t want to get butterflies in my stomach I want it to churn in disgust from his face, I don’t want to blush at him I want to turn red with anger. He leaned in to kiss me when the barkeep came a gave me my drink I let out a little sigh saved by the barkeep was all I could think to myself.
"Thank you" I got up to leave but tony grabbed me by my wrist and pulled me to the side.
"Have you been thinking about my offer?"
"Uh yeah Tony I can’t be with you"
"what" he shouted as his grip on my wrist tightened
"Tony I cant put up with your anger anymore and I just can’t deal with you"
"I’ve changed you know that"
"Tony it’s the same old song and dance with you, you say you’ve changed but you never do"
"Well let me prove that I have"
"Tony I can’t"
"Why not"
"Because that’s not the only reason I don’t wanna be with you anymore"
"What’s that suppose to mean"
"I love someone else" I slightly whispered
"What did you say"
"I love someone else tony" when I said this his grip tightened even more and I let out a slight yelp
"Tony let me go"
"No"
"Please tony please just let me go your hurting me"
"Let her go" Marcus said walking up behind tony
"oh please don’t tell me this is who your in love with" tony said the last part in a sarcastic tone
"let my girl go"
"oh your girl huh" tony let my wrist go and I could see a bruise where he was holding me I tried to run towards Marcus but tony stopped me. Marcus stepped closer to tony and curled his hand into a fist.
"move" Marcus commanded tony but he didn’t listen
"what you gonna do about it"
"I ain’t playing with you home boy ill kick yo ass get out her way"
"Tony if you don’t leave now ill call security"
"Whatever" tony said as he walked out the hotel
I just stood there staring at Marcus who still looked angry. He grabbed my hand and lead me outside. When we got outside he paced back in forth in front of me he was angry scratch that he was fuming.
"I was watching you’ll the whole time you let him just caress you and you almost let him kiss you"
"Marcus-"
"no let me finish all I'm saying is if I'm wasting my time tell me now cause im really putting myself out there for you shawty and I just wanna make sure the feelings are mutual"
"Marcus the feelings are mutual he’s my past and for a long time he was my everything and its hard to move on from that but I am because I know that you’re my future" I said as a few tears escaped my eyes. Marcus walked up to me and wiped the tears away from my eyes and gave me a kiss on forehead. I nestled my head in his neck and he held me tight.
"I love you" he whispered in my ear I pulled away from him and looked him in his gorgeous eyes.
"I love you too"
"I got you a present"
"Marcus you didn’t have to do that"
"I wanted to shawty"
Marcus pulled out a small ring box and my heart skipped a beat. When he opened it he reveled a heart shaped diamond on a silver band.
"Marcus I-"
"calm down shawty its not a engagement ring or anything" I let out a slight sigh but of disappointment I think Marcus realized this so he continued " I got something better planned for that" he gave me a wink and a smile.
"its gorgeous Marcus" I said as he slide it on my finger
"it use to be my moms diamond is my birthstone and she use to always say I ways say I was her heart hence the heart shaped diamond"
"oh my gosh Marcus I can’t"
"I want you too" he said as he gave me a kiss soon the kiss intensified as his tongue entered my mouth but the intense kiss was cut short as we heard fake coughs come from behind us.
"We been looking all over for you’ll" Katie yelled
"Its time to cut the cake" Derek said as he grabbed my arm and pulled me into the hotel up on the stage. The cake was gorgeous I picked it out weeks ago and I was still in awe as it was rolled in front of me. The large crowd all began singing happy birthday when they finished I closed my eyes and blew out the candles. I didn’t make a wish I already had everything I wanted a great boyfriend and wonderful friends. My mom handed me the cake cutter when I reached for it she saw the ring and I heard her let out a little gasp.
I cut six slices for me and the rest of my friends and the caters took the rest to distribute amongst the guest. I and Derek’s parents left around eleven because there flight left at midnight. The party ended around one all six of us piled back into the limo. We dropped Katie and Dawson at Dawson’s house and they both exited with a devilish grin on their face. Next we dropped Janelle off and she gave me a big hug and wished me a happy birthday. Derek fell asleep in the limo and me and Marcus just stared and laughed at him.
"anywhere else ma’am" the driver said
"yeah church and drexell" Marcus said
Soon we pulled up in front of the small lake Marcus took me before.
"did you have a happy birthday"
"I did thank you"
"I love you Audrey"
"I love you too Marcus"
He gave me a small kiss as he went to pull away I pulled him back into me. After a long breathless kiss we pulled apart and stared at each other in the eyes. I grabbed his hand and lead him back to the limo and told the driver to take us home. When we got to the house we woke Derek up and he went straight to his bedroom. Me and Marcus just stood at the door staring at each other. Then he wrapped his arm around my waist and pulled me into a kiss. I slowly walked backwards into the house and Marcus kicked the door shut without breaking our kiss. After we reached the stairs we finally pulled apart and I lead Marcus up to my room. When we got in the room he slowly laid me down on the bed kissing my lips then my neck and then my bare shoulder. I began to take off his jacket and slowly unbuttoned his shirt reveling a very chiseled and absolutely gorgeous body. He sat up and finished taking off his shirt. I turned my back to him gesturing for him to unzip my dress. As he unzipped my dress he slowly caressed my back sending chills through my spine. He continued to kiss my neck and then down to my breast I never felt as good as I did right then. I pulled at Marcus belt and zipper and he finished pulling my dress down. I had never wanted anyone as much as I wanted Marcus right now. He stared me in the eyes and gave me a kiss on my lips.
"I love you"
"I love you too"
Soon I was in heaven I felt nothing but pure ecstasy I never had anyone please me the way Marcus was and if possible I loved him even more know.


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