The Vampire Kidnapper's Love

A girl is kidnapped by a vampire.
"Bye Lilly," Ruby Harper said as she hugged her best friend, Lilly Morgan, goodbye. She tried unsuccessfully to hold back the tears. They had been best friends ever since they had both came to VSA (Venus School of the Arts) four years ago today. Lilly had been in the orchestra and she had been in everything else. (Lilly could play any instrument whereas Ruby couldn't play anything besides the piano and guitar.} Today, however, Lilly was leaving for the Christmas holidays and wasn't coming back. Ruby could understand. The last straw had when the orchestra teacher, Mr. Shaw, had tried to rape Lilly a week ago. (Somehow, he hadn't been fired. He must have been sleeping with the headmistress. Everyone knew she was a slut. As if those skimpy outfits she wore around the teachers-all male-, were supposed to show us what not to dress like.)

The only reason why he hadn't succeeded was because he had passed in a drunken stupor just as he had pushed his knees and Lilly's skirt up. If Ruby was honest with herself, she would realize that he had been ready to rape her too. He had told her that since she was hopeless in the orchestra, he was going to teach her a "different" kind of music just before he had tied her up, gagged her and tied her to the bed in his spare bedroom. Then, he left to wait for Lilly, who he had called over, claiming that he had found a new piece of music. All Ruby had been able to do was cry silently as she heard her best friend's screams in the other room.

Ruby forced away the memories and walked back to the campus. She could have called a cab but, she had liked the feel of the cool summer's night breeze on her face and flowing through her hair. She thought of how lonely she would be for the next two weeks. Everyone else in her dorm had gone home for the holidays. She, on the other hand, had no home to go to. She had no grandparents and here parents had both been an only child. Her mom had died when she was eight and her older brother had run away a year later. Her dad had remarried when she was seven. Her stepmother had hated her instantly and made sure she knew it (when her dad wasn't around). Then, one night when she was eleven and her father and stepmother were out, her 15-year old stepbrother and came into her room and raped her.

She had screamed through the whole thing, but her brother had muffled them, alternately using his hands and his brutal mouth.
She had told her father but her stepmother convinced him that she was lying. So every night for a year, her stepbrother had raped her. Sometimes, he had even come into the bathroom with her. She would have locked the doors but her stepmother had given him a key to every room in the house.

Then one night, her stepbrother had come in drunk with a few of his friends while her father and stepmother were having a party. Ruby had expected him to go to his room but instead he had come to hers. She had tried to scream over the loud bass of the music as he tied her up, to no success. It was only later when she had been raped numerous times by him and his friends that her father and stepmother had come in. They had ignored her tears and the fact that she was tied to her bed and called her a seductress. The next day, she had been shipped off to VSA and had met Lilly.

Just then, Ruby happened to glance at her watch. She gasped as she saw the time. She had four minutes before she would be breaking curfew. She glanced around and saw the park; she let out a sigh of relief. If she cut across the park, she would make it on campus on time. She quickly walked toward the park. Suddenly, she heard something move behind her. She whirled around, black hair spinning out behind her.
My opininon is that.......
I hated it
Could use a little work
It was alright I guess
It was interesting, I need to keep reading
It was great! more! more! more
I dont know what to say
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Published: 11/3/2010
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