The Untitled

Suicide thoughts coming back....
Silence through the house of tears,
Hopes and dreams fade with fears,
Of rejection sorrow and hate,
I've tried to be strong but I guess its just fate,
The girl that hated herself and more,
Had came back and knocked on my door,
She said "you fool you can’t escape me",
"I will find you wherever you flee",
I must defeat the girl inside,
Because if not.....I will surely die.

By ashton ochoa
Published: 2/9/2008 		Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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How was it?
the best!!
pretty damn good!
it was iight
it kinda sucked
it just plain flat out sounded like bullsh*t
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