The Unforgivable - Part 4

Well this is the last part. COMMENT POLL ;D
We headed up to her bedroom. Wow! It was big, and dirty.
"I'm just going to go to the bathroom" she said.
"Ok" I replied.
I started looking around. I found a thick book saying 'diary'.
I opened it and started to read the first page. I couldn't put the book down until it was finished.

Aww poor Kestrel no wonder she's like this. Wait a minute speaking of Kestrel, where is she it's been 20 minutes.
"You shouldn't be reading that" came a deep voice from the door.
"I know how it..." I started to explain but when I looked up I realized it wasn't Kestrel. It was a beautiful girl who had long blonde hair exactly how it was in Kestrels diary.
"Kate...?" I asked, shocked.
What the hell is Kate doing alive, she fell into a damn well!

"Hello....that's my sister's diary..." she said slowly.
"You're sick! How could you haunt your little sister when she didn't even mean for you to fall into the well" I replied.
"No one calls me sick" she laughed wickedly.
She started leaning towards me...
"Kestrel!!" I yelled.
"Lily....LILY!! Wait I'm coming!!!" she shouted back.
But she was too late Kate grabbed me and suddenly I felt nothing.
"Gotcha..."she whispered with a wicked laugh, and that was the last word I ever heard.
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Published: 8/30/2010
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