The Time of the Dinosaurs Chapter 2: Part 2

Nemehas men are being invaded by a warring country and fight back to survive.
Nemeha quickly got out of bed and went outside to assist his men. They were being ravished by the Shiashoo tribe. He took his bow and arrow, and shot it into the brain of one of the invaders. It went in about 5 inches, and being that Nemehas tribe made the sharpest blades in the world, and that they were trained in the art of accuracy, it was easily a death wound. He took another one out, set fire to it, then shot it at a herd of enemies killing one of Nemehas men. A smarter attacker sneaked up behind Nemeha, trying to slit his throat with a dagger. Nemeha sensed the person and elbowed him in the stomach, knocking the wind out of him. He took the dagger and slit open his stomach, leaving him to die.

He put the dagger in the ground then pulled out his spear. He speared 3 men with it before the rope snapped and it broke. He submitted to strangling the next 2 he killed. And of course he beat on to a bloody pulp.

He had saved his group from the evils of the Shiashoo, single handedly rescuing his team from sure death; again. Everyone treated him like a savior, even though he didn't know if he deserved it. Either way, the next night they treated him to a feast of a hog they caught and fine wine. Then they went on their way to find the Court of Laticios, south of where they were now, in the heart of Shiashoo Tribe territory, surrounded by unknown threats of terror that could include dinosaurs, more ransackers, or worse...
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Published: 8/23/2010
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