The Thoughts and Actions of a spirit

A fiction story about a young woman named Emily. She soon discovers what its like to be dead, useless, and unheard.
The Thoughts and Actions of a spirit
Emily scribbles down on her diary.

[Dear diary, Or journal? Hmm what should I call it. OH WELL,
First let me discuss Camion. Can you believe it! He asked me to dance at the Blue Sun Parlor. I felt absolutely swept away. ]

Oh well. Emily laughed and thought," What’s the point in diaries?; They’re useless. She laughed again alone in her room. She then picked up the journal with her so called diary entrees inside. She then walked over and ploped it into the trash beside her art shelf. Emily then proceeded to get out a sheet of paper. Emily then grimced and said, "Pointless, As If I will become a artest." She then got up and proceeded downstairs and into her car. Emily had always been one to second guess her thoughts and opinions. She often would head to do something; stop and then continue to do something else. But what Emily soon discovered was abrupt to her schedule. She was going to be LATE.

Emily drove fast. Going 75 she finally slowed at a little hospital. She walked in as she usually did around 12am. Every day around 12am she would come in to the hospital. Her mother Elain had checked her into the mental hospital, because she was more than worried that Emily would commit suicide or something of that nature. Emily sat down near the nurses ward and waited to be called in. Then all the sudden Emily began scream and go blank. She was having the worse pain imaginable. She began to turn blue and losse oxygen.

Nurses began to take Emily into the emergency room close by. They tried to save her. But they did not succeed. At 12:24am Emily died. But strange enough as Emily was leaving her whole life she awoke. She did not awake however in her body. She awoke as an arora outside her body. Worried, freaked out, and even more crazy; Emily began to scream and whail. She looked over and saw her mother just arriving into the emergency room. Heartstrocken she began to cry and even fell down. Emily really began to freak. She screamed till she felt she could no longer scream. But no one heard her at all. They did not even blink. It was as if she was trapped in her spirit. What would she do now? Would she ever dance again with her crush camion?
   By Jessica Singler
Published: 11/24/2008
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