The Secret Behind the Charming Jerk - Chapter 1 (Improved)
This is chapter 1 again, but improved (better) version of it. So please read this one the other one is just blah. So ya read this one, it is better. I hope you like it. :)
As I was entering the school hallway. I saw people form a crowd. (I seriously couldn't care less, but at the same time I was really tempted to find what that was all about.) So I made my way there to find out that it was actually a fight. I looked closer so see a familiar figure, as I stepped closer I found that it was my 15 year-old brother Mark, lying on the floor. And I could tell that he was seriously punched in the face. A just all the crowd was laughing I heard Mark say, "Rose sis, could help me out." All people stared at me, so I went to help him out. (but I seriously wanted to leave him there). But sadly I managed to blush as the embarrassment continue. I pushed through the crowd and lended him a hand to get up and told him, "You owe me big time." But in a whisper so no one but him could hear. As he started to get my hand and I help him get up, I saw a pair of gorgeous, mesmerizing brown eyes. I looked up to see the owner of those brown eyes to find a hot dude with a smirk on his face, (I guess he is the one that punched Mark, I owe him respect). So, after my brother got up I quickly headed to class, because I couldn't bear the embarrassment.
I couldn't forget about that 'hot dude' (I refer to him as that because I don't know his real name, well not yet anyway.) He looked really good, I could officially crown him on the top 10 list of cute boys at our school. But he kinda of looks like a player I could tell, boys with appearances like his a meant to be players.
So anyway, I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Rose Martin, I go to Blue River High School. I am an A+ student (but I'm NOT a nerd). My best friend is called Lisa. I love music, especially rock music. I have a younger brother Mark, he could be such a loser at most times but whether I like him or not he is my brother. I am Not self-obsessed like most girls in our school. I have light brown hair with blond streaks, and my are eyes dark green. So yeah that's pretty much it.
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Mark's P.O.V
I can't believe I got into Another fight with Kyle, he is really a pain. Maybe I should start walking in school without him seeing me. Seriously that dude has some deep issues that need therapy. I swear every time he sees me it's like he puts all the day's work on me. I think it's time I do something about it. But what? How can I make him stop bullying me around. I'm not talking about something evil or anything, but something that would make us have truce for once. Hhhh maybe fate will make him need my help one day, and when that day comes I will do my best not to disappoint fate for giving me that chance to have peace with that dude for once. *sigh* anyway, I should probably go to glass now before Mr. Felix sends me to detention again.
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Kyle's P.O.V
Wow, hmm wow she had the most beautiful green eyes I have ever seen in my life, and trust me I have seen a lot of green eyes before. But she, she was just beautiful, yup beautiful that is the only word that can describe how she looks. And I bet he has an amazing soul too. What, what am I saying? I have never ever talked about a girl this way, and I have been with a lot of girls. But she, she is different, definitely different but in a good way.
But, sis? Mark the loser said to that beautiful girl sis, I wonder have there even related. But it doesn't matter I will try to get her to like me. And that is a promise I made to myself. But how ? Maybe I will talk to her at lunch after class.
-Time passed by so slowing in English class, but I kept thinking about Rose all the time at class today, and it's not a habit of mine to keep thinking about a girl all this time. And I know if I even pay attention in class at all today. -
As I was heading out of class I pumped into someone. I looked up to see a pair of beautiful green eyes. I think by now you know who it is, it was Rose. Then I saw her books on the ground so I helped her with them. "Hi" was all I managed to say.
"Hi," she said, God her voice was so pure and amazing.
"Um sorry I pumped into you?" I said but I sounded a bit nervous don't know why.
"Oh, don't be." She said with a hint of a smile on her beautiful face.
"Hahaha." I laughed a bit, hmm she doesn't mind that we pumped into each other interesting, then I smiled.
Then she collected her books while I helped, God, I am such a gentleman aren't I than smiled again but this time she managed to smile back. Her smile was amazing. I think, that everything about this girl is amazing.
Then she just left. I have to make my move and talk to her again, & again and again.
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Rose's P.O.V
Just as I was heading to math class I pumped into someone just as I was going to say something, I looked up to see a familiar pair of brown eyes. I look up to see it was that 'hot dude' that punched my little brother Mark.
"Hi," he's saying. His voice was just wonderful.
"Hi." Was how I replied while staring in his brown eyes.
"Um sorry I pumped into you?" He said while smiling.
"Oh, don't be." Oh my God, did I just say that?
"Hahaha," was all that can out of his mouth then starting laughing, Douche was all that I thought of him now, but a hot douche though.
I started collecting my book and so did he, aww what a gentleman, not! Then I lift.
What a weird day. I thought to myself.
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Reply on previous comments:
REGINA : OMG thank you, that really means A LOT to me thank you oxoxx :)
Ashana : I REALLY want to thank you very much and then again T_H_A_N_K you oxoxo :)
Emily : Thank you so much you are too sweet and thanks 4 the advice, really help a lot :) xoxoxo.
I couldn't forget about that 'hot dude' (I refer to him as that because I don't know his real name, well not yet anyway.) He looked really good, I could officially crown him on the top 10 list of cute boys at our school. But he kinda of looks like a player I could tell, boys with appearances like his a meant to be players.
So anyway, I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Rose Martin, I go to Blue River High School. I am an A+ student (but I'm NOT a nerd). My best friend is called Lisa. I love music, especially rock music. I have a younger brother Mark, he could be such a loser at most times but whether I like him or not he is my brother. I am Not self-obsessed like most girls in our school. I have light brown hair with blond streaks, and my are eyes dark green. So yeah that's pretty much it.
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Mark's P.O.V
I can't believe I got into Another fight with Kyle, he is really a pain. Maybe I should start walking in school without him seeing me. Seriously that dude has some deep issues that need therapy. I swear every time he sees me it's like he puts all the day's work on me. I think it's time I do something about it. But what? How can I make him stop bullying me around. I'm not talking about something evil or anything, but something that would make us have truce for once. Hhhh maybe fate will make him need my help one day, and when that day comes I will do my best not to disappoint fate for giving me that chance to have peace with that dude for once. *sigh* anyway, I should probably go to glass now before Mr. Felix sends me to detention again.
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Kyle's P.O.V
Wow, hmm wow she had the most beautiful green eyes I have ever seen in my life, and trust me I have seen a lot of green eyes before. But she, she was just beautiful, yup beautiful that is the only word that can describe how she looks. And I bet he has an amazing soul too. What, what am I saying? I have never ever talked about a girl this way, and I have been with a lot of girls. But she, she is different, definitely different but in a good way.
But, sis? Mark the loser said to that beautiful girl sis, I wonder have there even related. But it doesn't matter I will try to get her to like me. And that is a promise I made to myself. But how ? Maybe I will talk to her at lunch after class.
-Time passed by so slowing in English class, but I kept thinking about Rose all the time at class today, and it's not a habit of mine to keep thinking about a girl all this time. And I know if I even pay attention in class at all today. -
As I was heading out of class I pumped into someone. I looked up to see a pair of beautiful green eyes. I think by now you know who it is, it was Rose. Then I saw her books on the ground so I helped her with them. "Hi" was all I managed to say.
"Hi," she said, God her voice was so pure and amazing.
"Um sorry I pumped into you?" I said but I sounded a bit nervous don't know why.
"Oh, don't be." She said with a hint of a smile on her beautiful face.
"Hahaha." I laughed a bit, hmm she doesn't mind that we pumped into each other interesting, then I smiled.
Then she collected her books while I helped, God, I am such a gentleman aren't I than smiled again but this time she managed to smile back. Her smile was amazing. I think, that everything about this girl is amazing.
Then she just left. I have to make my move and talk to her again, & again and again.
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Rose's P.O.V
Just as I was heading to math class I pumped into someone just as I was going to say something, I looked up to see a familiar pair of brown eyes. I look up to see it was that 'hot dude' that punched my little brother Mark.
"Hi," he's saying. His voice was just wonderful.
"Hi." Was how I replied while staring in his brown eyes.
"Um sorry I pumped into you?" He said while smiling.
"Oh, don't be." Oh my God, did I just say that?
"Hahaha," was all that can out of his mouth then starting laughing, Douche was all that I thought of him now, but a hot douche though.
I started collecting my book and so did he, aww what a gentleman, not! Then I lift.
What a weird day. I thought to myself.
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Reply on previous comments:
REGINA : OMG thank you, that really means A LOT to me thank you oxoxx :)
Ashana : I REALLY want to thank you very much and then again T_H_A_N_K you oxoxo :)
Emily : Thank you so much you are too sweet and thanks 4 the advice, really help a lot :) xoxoxo.
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