The Pain I Can't Take

I wrote this last night and I'm not sure how good it is so please comment!
I know I'm not the only one broken down
But it feels like I'm the only one around
Am I the only one that feels walked on?
Am I the only one frowned upon?
It feels like everything's falling down on me
All I want is to finally be free
I can take the slaps, the kicks, the screaming
But the broken heart is what gets me steaming
I can live with physical pain
But every time you say my name
I feel my heartbreak
A little bit more
It's going to be crushed
Of that I am sure
Everyday I deal with the yelling
All my bruises turn to swelling
But one thing that I can't take on
Is the pain I have in my heart from dusk to dawn
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Published: 1/4/2011
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