The Noose Chapter Three: Love Is Painful
Here is Chapter 3, I know that I have gotten a lot of bad results from the last poll, I think its cos of the fact of Erik being gay. Give me some constructive criticism.
The door handle turned and then there he was, standing there so perfectly, his bare chest, towel around his waist. I didn't know who he was but I knew that I had to find out. He just stood there and looked at me, I must have been a mess, drenched in water and tears. I just stood there staring into his bright green eyes, the same eyes as.....
"Kiara, your friend is here", I thought he is her BROTHER, I didn't know that she had a brother till that point and it shocked me. Kiara came bounding up the hallway and squeezed past "him" so she could hug me, she noticed that I was soaked and said to me "gosh daaarling, you're all wet", she grabbed my hand and began dragging me into the house. As I walked past "him" I could smell the sweet cologne he used, I could taste the fruit conditioner in my mouth, for a split second I closed my eyes to draw in those smells.
"Who was that, I mean I took assumption that he is your brother seeing that he has the same green eyes as you but I never knew you had a brother" I was still in shock from seeing "him" for the first time.
"His name is Samson, he is about 2 years older than me and one year older than you, he came to live with us since my dad kicked him out for smoking", Samson I thought to myself, what a great name. I changed into dry, clean clothes and sat on Kiara's bed and the most amazing daydream began.
"Erik, Erik, wake up", Samson was standing over me, "Erik, daaarling, wake up" the scent of his cologne once again was invading my nostrils.
THWACK
Kiara had thrown a pillow at my head, during the best daydream of my LIFE!
After I told her what had happened Samson came and knocked on Kiara's door, now dressed in a loose-fitting shirt and cargo shorts he looked stunning, then I came to a conclusion, I have fallen for Kiara's brother!
"Kiara and uh, her friend, dinners ready", Samson gave a quick glance in my direction before smirking and turning to walk out the door.
"Samson, wait" Oh dear, what have I done? Think quickly, what to do......
"Samson, we haven't properly met, I'm Erik and I suppose Kiara has probably mentioned me", his gaze met mine and my heart melted, till he spoke,
"Oh, Erik, real nice to meet you, you're the gay one right", Kiara glared across the room at Samson and Samson stood and left the room without another word.
At dinner Kiara's mother, Trish was really nice to me, Samson was giving me disgusted looks across the table and I had never felt so much like a pariah, an outsider, just plain strange.
Later that night Kiara and I were in the bathroom brushing our teeth and Samson walked in, completely ignoring us and opened the cabinet. He pulled out his toothbrush and gestured for me to hand him the toothpaste so I did. As Samson was squeezing the toothpaste onto his toothbrush he looked at me, "hey mate, no hard feelings for earlier, I didn't mean to be so blunt about it and I just want you to know that I have nothing against you in any way". Shocked, I spat the toothpaste from my mouth, muttered "thanks" and walked out of the room.
Laying on the spare bed in Kiara's room I stared at the ceiling and thought.
I heard the shower turning on in the room next door as Kiara was just getting in the shower and then I heard footsteps, approaching, the same masculine ones that answered the door and they were coming this way, I brushed my fringe off my face and thought to myself act casual, act casual.
Samson leant on the doorway for a second then he came and sat on my bed near where I was, we talked for a while, about Kiara and what happened with his dad kicking him out. Then came that silence, the one you feel just when you're in a hospital room and the heart monitor is reading no pulse, you hold your breath, and the heart monitor begins beeping again.
I knew that if there was a time, it was then, I leant in and kissed him, he didn't kiss back but he didn't resist. That's when I heard the scream, Kiara's scream. Samson pushed me off him and ran out of the room after Kiara. I grabbed the stuff that was still packed in my bags and ran out the door, what had I done, what was I going to do?
"Kiara, your friend is here", I thought he is her BROTHER, I didn't know that she had a brother till that point and it shocked me. Kiara came bounding up the hallway and squeezed past "him" so she could hug me, she noticed that I was soaked and said to me "gosh daaarling, you're all wet", she grabbed my hand and began dragging me into the house. As I walked past "him" I could smell the sweet cologne he used, I could taste the fruit conditioner in my mouth, for a split second I closed my eyes to draw in those smells.
"Who was that, I mean I took assumption that he is your brother seeing that he has the same green eyes as you but I never knew you had a brother" I was still in shock from seeing "him" for the first time.
"His name is Samson, he is about 2 years older than me and one year older than you, he came to live with us since my dad kicked him out for smoking", Samson I thought to myself, what a great name. I changed into dry, clean clothes and sat on Kiara's bed and the most amazing daydream began.
"Erik, Erik, wake up", Samson was standing over me, "Erik, daaarling, wake up" the scent of his cologne once again was invading my nostrils.
THWACK
Kiara had thrown a pillow at my head, during the best daydream of my LIFE!
After I told her what had happened Samson came and knocked on Kiara's door, now dressed in a loose-fitting shirt and cargo shorts he looked stunning, then I came to a conclusion, I have fallen for Kiara's brother!
"Kiara and uh, her friend, dinners ready", Samson gave a quick glance in my direction before smirking and turning to walk out the door.
"Samson, wait" Oh dear, what have I done? Think quickly, what to do......
"Samson, we haven't properly met, I'm Erik and I suppose Kiara has probably mentioned me", his gaze met mine and my heart melted, till he spoke,
"Oh, Erik, real nice to meet you, you're the gay one right", Kiara glared across the room at Samson and Samson stood and left the room without another word.
At dinner Kiara's mother, Trish was really nice to me, Samson was giving me disgusted looks across the table and I had never felt so much like a pariah, an outsider, just plain strange.
Later that night Kiara and I were in the bathroom brushing our teeth and Samson walked in, completely ignoring us and opened the cabinet. He pulled out his toothbrush and gestured for me to hand him the toothpaste so I did. As Samson was squeezing the toothpaste onto his toothbrush he looked at me, "hey mate, no hard feelings for earlier, I didn't mean to be so blunt about it and I just want you to know that I have nothing against you in any way". Shocked, I spat the toothpaste from my mouth, muttered "thanks" and walked out of the room.
Laying on the spare bed in Kiara's room I stared at the ceiling and thought.
I heard the shower turning on in the room next door as Kiara was just getting in the shower and then I heard footsteps, approaching, the same masculine ones that answered the door and they were coming this way, I brushed my fringe off my face and thought to myself act casual, act casual.
Samson leant on the doorway for a second then he came and sat on my bed near where I was, we talked for a while, about Kiara and what happened with his dad kicking him out. Then came that silence, the one you feel just when you're in a hospital room and the heart monitor is reading no pulse, you hold your breath, and the heart monitor begins beeping again.
I knew that if there was a time, it was then, I leant in and kissed him, he didn't kiss back but he didn't resist. That's when I heard the scream, Kiara's scream. Samson pushed me off him and ran out of the room after Kiara. I grabbed the stuff that was still packed in my bags and ran out the door, what had I done, what was I going to do?
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