The Night
I got into a fight with my mother about sleeping at night.. and it inspired me to write this poem.. I truly do not know what to think of it.. Hah, I'm nervous of what you all will think.. This is my first time sharing any of my writing publicly. Any criticism will be appreciated nice.. OR not. Umm.. Enjoy?
Standing under this moonlight it calms me
But for others it brings fear
I cannot see how the night sky can bring such distress
Cause for me it brings only bliss
The night breeze soothes me
The twinkling stars brings happiness to my mind, heart, and soul
There is no better feeling then looking up into the night sky and getting lost in your thoughts
You have asked why I love the night
And I have answered
Now ask yourself
How can I sleep through the night
But for others it brings fear
I cannot see how the night sky can bring such distress
Cause for me it brings only bliss
The night breeze soothes me
The twinkling stars brings happiness to my mind, heart, and soul
There is no better feeling then looking up into the night sky and getting lost in your thoughts
You have asked why I love the night
And I have answered
Now ask yourself
How can I sleep through the night
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