The Island - Chapter Three
For the small number of people who actually read this: Thank you!
Sorry for taking long!
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Trika. : Thank you! I'll post pics of Patrick & Brody soon!
Heather Towell : Thanks I try to make my stories different because I went through a phase were all my stories were really predictable lol
Kurterina : Haha I try to make him really intense lol please comment!
Andy : Um okay? I don't know about you but I don't want my life to be like this lol
Alex Gonzalez : Thanks Cousin(:
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"I want a double cheeseburger with extra pickles."
"I want a big ice cream sundae with chocolate syrup and sprinkles."
"I want a big saucy pizza with breadsticks."
My stomach grumbled as everyone took turns saying what type of food they want right now. We were hungry, tired and just about sick of each other. Even Myra didn't want to be anywhere near Tony.
Lexi, who I would consider a slut, played sick so she could rest her head on Derrick's lap. She tried that on Brody but he got up and shook his head. I stared at the semi okay fire that we had built and were now huddled around.
Patrick sat next to me and smiled shyly. I smiled back but continued to stare at the fire.
"Instead of sitting here hungry why don't we just look for food!" Patricia said getting up. Drake stood in encouragement. Everyone grumbled but they stood up and paired off. I chose to go off alone.
I made my way to a bush that looked like it had berries on it but I just stared at them.
"Maybe you should pick one of those." I looked up and Brody was standing there. He didn't smile or frown or do anything.
His face was blank and his eyes intense. I froze trying hard not to punch the guy for being so cute and mysterious. He winked and then began picking the berries.
"He is totally trying to hit on my girl!" I heard someone whisper loudly from someplace hidden. I didn't move, wanting to hear more.
"Do you seriously think Andrea would dig you, man? For real, she'd be into me." Someone else said. I heard shoving and rustling until I saw Derrick and Patrick fall out of a palm tree up ahead. I raised my eyebrow at them.
Brody snickered but then went silent. He cocked his head to the side hearing something that the rest of us couldn't.
"There's a storm coming." He said calmly. My eyes widened.
"Well what are we waiting for?! Let's build a boat or climb a tree or something! Seriously!" Patrick yelled he got down on his knees and started praying. Well it only looked like he was praying.
I heard him mumble, "I'm too hot to die." I rolled my eyes and waited for Brody to say something. He continued to listen and then started walking off in the direction of the fire.
"Come on." He said in his deep voice. Derrick quickly smacked Patrick on the head so he would get up and follow. I speed walked so I wouldn't be caught in another conversation with Patrick.
Once we made it to the fire, Brody had already gathered the rest of the survivors. We all sat down on the sandy beach except Brody.
"Listen, it's possible that this storm can create monster waves that will kill us all." He said it like getting killed was nothing. Everyone gasped.
"Well you can at least try to save me! I have a baby so I'm more important!" Myra yelled getting up. Patricia grabbed a handful of sand and through it on Myra's head.
Myra smacked Patricia and then BOOM:
Catfight.
Brody stood silent as he watched everyone scramble to break the girls up. What I really wanted to do is smack everybody in the face for not listening to Brody.
I sighed loudly and walked towards the shore. I watched the water when suddenly a huge wave started to form.
I'm guessing this is what Brody meant by Monster Wave. As it formed, rain started coming down.
Hard.
I looked to see if the others had noticed but they were still surrounding Myra and Patricia. I looked back at the huge wave and saw that it was already starting to come down.
"Hey um, guys?" I yelled. They all turned around and almost at once said, 'WHAT?!'.
"I think we should climb a tree." I pointed at the ocean. First there was silence, and then more silence, and then screams.
"Run!" Drake yelled as he scrambled towards the jungle. Everyone followed and I was paralyzed as I watched the wave come crashing down.
"Andrea! Andrea!" Brody screamed over the loud noise the rain was making. I closed my eyes and waited for the water but it didn't come. Well except for the rain. Brody had swept me up and was now running.
I was freezing but being in his arms made me feel warm. I wasn't warm for long though because water was suddenly filling my lungs. And now all I could see was the blue, angry ocean.
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Comment?
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Trika. : Thank you! I'll post pics of Patrick & Brody soon!
Heather Towell : Thanks I try to make my stories different because I went through a phase were all my stories were really predictable lol
Kurterina : Haha I try to make him really intense lol please comment!
Andy : Um okay? I don't know about you but I don't want my life to be like this lol
Alex Gonzalez : Thanks Cousin(:
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"I want a double cheeseburger with extra pickles."
"I want a big ice cream sundae with chocolate syrup and sprinkles."
"I want a big saucy pizza with breadsticks."
My stomach grumbled as everyone took turns saying what type of food they want right now. We were hungry, tired and just about sick of each other. Even Myra didn't want to be anywhere near Tony.
Lexi, who I would consider a slut, played sick so she could rest her head on Derrick's lap. She tried that on Brody but he got up and shook his head. I stared at the semi okay fire that we had built and were now huddled around.
Patrick sat next to me and smiled shyly. I smiled back but continued to stare at the fire.
"Instead of sitting here hungry why don't we just look for food!" Patricia said getting up. Drake stood in encouragement. Everyone grumbled but they stood up and paired off. I chose to go off alone.
I made my way to a bush that looked like it had berries on it but I just stared at them.
"Maybe you should pick one of those." I looked up and Brody was standing there. He didn't smile or frown or do anything.
His face was blank and his eyes intense. I froze trying hard not to punch the guy for being so cute and mysterious. He winked and then began picking the berries.
"He is totally trying to hit on my girl!" I heard someone whisper loudly from someplace hidden. I didn't move, wanting to hear more.
"Do you seriously think Andrea would dig you, man? For real, she'd be into me." Someone else said. I heard shoving and rustling until I saw Derrick and Patrick fall out of a palm tree up ahead. I raised my eyebrow at them.
Brody snickered but then went silent. He cocked his head to the side hearing something that the rest of us couldn't.
"There's a storm coming." He said calmly. My eyes widened.
"Well what are we waiting for?! Let's build a boat or climb a tree or something! Seriously!" Patrick yelled he got down on his knees and started praying. Well it only looked like he was praying.
I heard him mumble, "I'm too hot to die." I rolled my eyes and waited for Brody to say something. He continued to listen and then started walking off in the direction of the fire.
"Come on." He said in his deep voice. Derrick quickly smacked Patrick on the head so he would get up and follow. I speed walked so I wouldn't be caught in another conversation with Patrick.
Once we made it to the fire, Brody had already gathered the rest of the survivors. We all sat down on the sandy beach except Brody.
"Listen, it's possible that this storm can create monster waves that will kill us all." He said it like getting killed was nothing. Everyone gasped.
"Well you can at least try to save me! I have a baby so I'm more important!" Myra yelled getting up. Patricia grabbed a handful of sand and through it on Myra's head.
Myra smacked Patricia and then BOOM:
Catfight.
Brody stood silent as he watched everyone scramble to break the girls up. What I really wanted to do is smack everybody in the face for not listening to Brody.
I sighed loudly and walked towards the shore. I watched the water when suddenly a huge wave started to form.
I'm guessing this is what Brody meant by Monster Wave. As it formed, rain started coming down.
Hard.
I looked to see if the others had noticed but they were still surrounding Myra and Patricia. I looked back at the huge wave and saw that it was already starting to come down.
"Hey um, guys?" I yelled. They all turned around and almost at once said, 'WHAT?!'.
"I think we should climb a tree." I pointed at the ocean. First there was silence, and then more silence, and then screams.
"Run!" Drake yelled as he scrambled towards the jungle. Everyone followed and I was paralyzed as I watched the wave come crashing down.
"Andrea! Andrea!" Brody screamed over the loud noise the rain was making. I closed my eyes and waited for the water but it didn't come. Well except for the rain. Brody had swept me up and was now running.
I was freezing but being in his arms made me feel warm. I wasn't warm for long though because water was suddenly filling my lungs. And now all I could see was the blue, angry ocean.
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