The Eyes of Love and Hate

I know this is kind of hard to understand but I’m only 14 so...
As I walk down this path of life and love,
I look into her eyes and they stop me in my tracks,
They stop the world around me,
And take me to a world unknown,
A world full of beauty and wonder,
A world with no chaos or misery,
But what happens when her eyes close forever?
Will they ever return?

She's good but she's evil,
You can always tell by her smile,
Her friends try to control her,
But she always ends up controlling them,
She thinks her actions are for the best,
But all they do is break my heart,
Her friends aren't the greatest,
And their advice even worse,
But when I look into her eyes,
I can never tell any lies.

So as I walk down this path of life and love,
I gaze into her eyes and they stop me in my tracks,
They stop the time around me,
And take me to a place unknown,
A place full of beauty and wonder,
A place with no chaos or misery,
But what happens when her eyes close forever?
Will they ever return?

By Paul Kiernan
Published: 6/18/2008
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