The Eclipse

The eclipse is compare with something that you love a lot.
Morning day felt like will not come again
Insight the eclipse I saw in the beautiful sky
Traveling so fast like days that cannot be detain
Spited away from me drive me insane
Useless implore I made, but I had to say it bye
Beyond my eye its flies; when it dies I’ll cry and I ask why
Intact must be or I’ll complain
Such memory that cannot be explain
Hard to lie, but inside my heart I feel the pain
Important sign was the eclipse. I cannot retrace when I first saw it high in the shinny sky that is why I say goodbye.
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Published: 1/10/2011
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