The Detective - Ch. 1
This is about a detective trying to find murders and kidnappers, not the best story but it was one of my first stories I wrote, its years old and think people should see them, comment them so I can improve this story, thanks.
At Dundee, Michigian, there were this detective named Shelly Smith. I just started to work at Dundee. I live in a two story house just in town. I came home and started to take a shower. I have long blond hair with blue eyes, a small nose, and I am five foot six inches. When I got out of the shower, my boyfriend called me. His name is Nathan Tiger. He's six foot two inches. He has brown hair, green eyes, a medium nose, and he was a hunk of a man. I'm still debating if he is the right man for me. He works in the security at the White House.
Nathan said, "I took a week vacation to come up to Dundee to be with you."
So I told him I'd be home. Once I hung up the phone, I read the newspaper and found that a person in Dundee got murdered when asleep. I tried to see if the paper has evidence of what happen, but nothing. So I went to bed and tried to get rest.
I heard someone inside my house and tried to sneak around with my ping pong paddle in hand when I took out of my room. When I reached in the living room, it was of course my boyfriend was home.
"I know you are on a different shift than me, but you should have came in the morning!"
I turned on the lights and saw that it was five o'clock in the morning.
"Why do you have a ping pong paddle in your hand?"
I wanted to sound professional but it came out wrong. "A robber in the house?"
He started to laugh because it was a small town and nobody would steal anything. So I went to bed, prayed that hopefully a robber won't come in my house and steals things or kill me, but Nathan is here to protect me if anything happens, so I went to sleep.
Nathan said, "I took a week vacation to come up to Dundee to be with you."
So I told him I'd be home. Once I hung up the phone, I read the newspaper and found that a person in Dundee got murdered when asleep. I tried to see if the paper has evidence of what happen, but nothing. So I went to bed and tried to get rest.
I heard someone inside my house and tried to sneak around with my ping pong paddle in hand when I took out of my room. When I reached in the living room, it was of course my boyfriend was home.
"I know you are on a different shift than me, but you should have came in the morning!"
I turned on the lights and saw that it was five o'clock in the morning.
"Why do you have a ping pong paddle in your hand?"
I wanted to sound professional but it came out wrong. "A robber in the house?"
He started to laugh because it was a small town and nobody would steal anything. So I went to bed, prayed that hopefully a robber won't come in my house and steals things or kill me, but Nathan is here to protect me if anything happens, so I went to sleep.
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