The Day It All Went Wrong
Love went too far...
One night I met this boy on MySpace and he was the boy of my dreams nice smile.. Dressed good and always kept me smiling…we talked every night of every minute when one day every thing went down hill.
The phone rang at 7 at night and he told me to meet him down by the lake and I was like well I don’t know if I should it’s kind of getting dark.. And he begged me so I said fine. I grabbed my coat and walked out the door, mother stopped me and asked me were I was going and I told her to pick up the paper from the store. She told me to not be that long. I left and walked down the side walk.. I looked at the neighbors and they watched me walk…as if I wasn’t going to come back. I started to get worried like they knew I lied to my mother or something.
I made it to the park and I sat on a bench, I scooted further on the bench and I saw a piece of paper and it said on the top to not read until eight o’clock…I waited till it was 7:59 and I read it.. I unfolded one paper at a time and the first line said I love you. I read a little further and it said I really hated to do this but I had to.
The last line said now go to the tree. I got scared and I was nervous, all these thoughts ran through my head … Did he kill himself, is this a joke ... Is some one watching me what to do next... I waited by the tree and saw this teddy bear, on it had a stem and a rose petal.. And I was like this is dumb so I started to walk home.. I walked past the bench I was sitting on and there was someone sitting right their like he knew I was going to leave. I tapped him on the shoulder and asked if he was ok.. And he asked me my name and I told him.
His phone rings and I look at the sky trying to get gods attention, I tell the man I have to leave and he grabs my arm ... I get scared and I try to get out.. He throws me in the car and I scream. In the van was a poem and he said read it to me....It read:
This night was yours
Not mine to start
This night I died
Without you in my heart
This night I cried
Holding this blade
This night I come and take you away
I had no clue what it was trying to say to me and I cried because I knew I wasn’t going home… Why was I so dumb and didn’t stay home. I should have known that staying out that late, waiting on some thing wouldn’t go right. I love you mom I scream out loud ... The man jumps in the car and drives off I’m crying knowing that I’d get hurt .. Some one help me .. I move out the papers to find something I can use. And there goes a letter..I didn’t want to read ne more… Because I knew what it would say.. I screamed more and more.. And I wanted to get away…I pulled the mans seat back and I look there I see a knife .. I pulled it and cut him.. And he swerved the car and boom we crashed.
The police sirens were loud and I hear many voices... They rush us all to the hospital.. Moments later while I’m on my bed I hear the flat line and I’m gone......
The police announce I died from impact and I couldn’t live any longer, and they did what they could do, and my mom goes in to the man’s room and yells at him crying out her lungs. And the man passed her a card and it read to you my dear it’s a joke, I’ll meet you by your door. The man is my father and he was in the joke with me… I had flowers and bears and everything you want at your door a little something to say I love you and I’ll die without you in my heart and in my life. And she cries. Later that night the boy comes in and he held my hand and didn’t want to leave until I came back but I had no clue I killed myself because I was scared, I had no clue. Now the covers go over my head and things get dark for me...
His father is released from the hospital and turns on the TV and sees that his son committed suicide just to be with the love of his life, and he cries and tells god.. It was all a joke now I have nothing, what am I suppose to do. He will give up one day but today was not the day…
The phone rang at 7 at night and he told me to meet him down by the lake and I was like well I don’t know if I should it’s kind of getting dark.. And he begged me so I said fine. I grabbed my coat and walked out the door, mother stopped me and asked me were I was going and I told her to pick up the paper from the store. She told me to not be that long. I left and walked down the side walk.. I looked at the neighbors and they watched me walk…as if I wasn’t going to come back. I started to get worried like they knew I lied to my mother or something.
I made it to the park and I sat on a bench, I scooted further on the bench and I saw a piece of paper and it said on the top to not read until eight o’clock…I waited till it was 7:59 and I read it.. I unfolded one paper at a time and the first line said I love you. I read a little further and it said I really hated to do this but I had to.
The last line said now go to the tree. I got scared and I was nervous, all these thoughts ran through my head … Did he kill himself, is this a joke ... Is some one watching me what to do next... I waited by the tree and saw this teddy bear, on it had a stem and a rose petal.. And I was like this is dumb so I started to walk home.. I walked past the bench I was sitting on and there was someone sitting right their like he knew I was going to leave. I tapped him on the shoulder and asked if he was ok.. And he asked me my name and I told him.
His phone rings and I look at the sky trying to get gods attention, I tell the man I have to leave and he grabs my arm ... I get scared and I try to get out.. He throws me in the car and I scream. In the van was a poem and he said read it to me....It read:
This night was yours
Not mine to start
This night I died
Without you in my heart
This night I cried
Holding this blade
This night I come and take you away
I had no clue what it was trying to say to me and I cried because I knew I wasn’t going home… Why was I so dumb and didn’t stay home. I should have known that staying out that late, waiting on some thing wouldn’t go right. I love you mom I scream out loud ... The man jumps in the car and drives off I’m crying knowing that I’d get hurt .. Some one help me .. I move out the papers to find something I can use. And there goes a letter..I didn’t want to read ne more… Because I knew what it would say.. I screamed more and more.. And I wanted to get away…I pulled the mans seat back and I look there I see a knife .. I pulled it and cut him.. And he swerved the car and boom we crashed.
The police sirens were loud and I hear many voices... They rush us all to the hospital.. Moments later while I’m on my bed I hear the flat line and I’m gone......
The police announce I died from impact and I couldn’t live any longer, and they did what they could do, and my mom goes in to the man’s room and yells at him crying out her lungs. And the man passed her a card and it read to you my dear it’s a joke, I’ll meet you by your door. The man is my father and he was in the joke with me… I had flowers and bears and everything you want at your door a little something to say I love you and I’ll die without you in my heart and in my life. And she cries. Later that night the boy comes in and he held my hand and didn’t want to leave until I came back but I had no clue I killed myself because I was scared, I had no clue. Now the covers go over my head and things get dark for me...
His father is released from the hospital and turns on the TV and sees that his son committed suicide just to be with the love of his life, and he cries and tells god.. It was all a joke now I have nothing, what am I suppose to do. He will give up one day but today was not the day…
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