The Breakout of the Loch Ness Monster
Hello readers, this is one of my first stories that I've ever done. So I probably have a few errors in my storyline, so please when you comment, don't be harsh, and also, if you find anything strange or something you don't understand, I'll see those mistakes I've done so i don't have to make them in the future. Thank you for reading this description and have a good time reading my story.
In the year 2011, a group of investigators had launched a military made submarine, into the Loch Ness, to see if they could find the mysterious water monster, Nessie. 6 months later after the submarine plunged underwater, the people of Scotland saw something rising up from the surface, the submarine. But something else came up with it, and it was struggling to be free from the net, it was... Nessie! After that capture, pictures were flashing from all over Scotland, riots has been happening between the "Leave Nessie Alone" Group and the armored soldiers, and this was all really happening. But the 'Help Nessie group' lost.. they took Nessie to a military base 30 miles west of the loch Ness and placed it in the water cage for further research.
2 years later after the capture of Nessie, the government had decided to make a theme park for the loch ness Monster. The rides were called The roller coaster of the deep, the candy's were called candy beast, corn teeth etc, and the main attraction is the Loch Ness Monster itself... "Mommy, Mommy! I want to touch it"! Said the thrilled little girl, No!! Don't do it sweetie it's going to bite you! Said the frightful mother, but mom!! Please!" "I said no and that's final, now let's go find your father," "aww.. The girl looked back while walking away with her mother and said, bye bye dolphin!"
Later on that day as the youthful and energetic child is passing by the people with her mother, she notices on the corner of her eye that there is a group of adults in black clothes with huge gym bags, walking toward where the loch ness monster's water prison was held.
"We are in position, over" said the mysterious man. "Roger that, Eve out" said the woman on the man's radio "Ok guys, you know what to do, let's go. Said the man in the black clothes. "Hey boss I was just wonde- "I told you before David, my name is John, understand?" "yeah I understand" said David. "Anyway, I was wondering, when we find Nes (Nessie) what do we do next?" "let just ask you this, where were you when we had this discussion with the whole group?" asked john with a disappointed face. "Umm..
I was in the bathroom?" *John sighs* ok, lets recap quickly cause we are almost there," "ok we rigged the place around Nes's cage, and when I push this button in my pocket, the explosives underground will blow up, but before that could happen we have to attach ropes on the holders of the cage so we can drop Nes down safely, then when we are at the bottom there is going to be a cargo truck waiting, then we put Nes in there and we drive straight towards the waters. Ok?" said John "yeah I'm good, just one question though how can we get the ropes to the cage if its too high to reach, asked David." "Don't worry about that, we have a few friends on the inside. John pointed toward where the employers where feeding Nessie. "They are one of us" John said, you don't have to worry about them. "Ok I got the plan" said David. "Good, now let's get this show on the road." Said John with an eager smile.
John places his hand on the radio. "Ok... start the truck" "Roger that John, we'll see you at the bottom over" said Eve. "Alright ready David, Joss?" "Ready!" said Joss and David. John presses the button. An explosive goes off. Everyone started to scream hysterically begins running away to the exit. "Ok team! We have a few seconds till the cops start showing up, get in positions everyone!" Said john. Everyone climbed the two ladders that were on the side of the enclosed glass, they wrapped the ropes on the handlers of the cage and threw it to the metal supporters, they grabbed the rope and tied a knot. As they were going though the ground they saw the cops had already shown up and started firing.
One of the cops starts to shoot "Seize fire! Seize fire! We cannot harm the monster!" Said the commanding officer. "So what?! if we shoot it, the men in white were experimenting this thing when they were "researching" it. And look, it hardly has a scratch on its skin." Said one of the police officers. The commanding officer stayed silent. Upset, the officer got the speaker and told everyone to start firing. Gunshots were flying though the air. "John! Why are they shooting?! Asked David "I don't know! I think they don't care if they kill Nes, everyone pull out your weapon's and shields! we have to protect it! As John made the call to tell his team to pull out their arsenals gunshots were blazing though the air.
One of the gunshots penetrated the glassed prison. "Damn it! Hold on Nessie we're almost there! Said John. "Sir! They're escaping, "I know already Johnson! We have to go to the loch that's where they are heading, lets go officers! Said the commanding chief. "Yo John, why are they retreating? Asked David. "They are going to the loch, John smirking a smile. "Um, dude why are you smiling? that's bad! all the cops are going to be there, we'll be sitting ducks if we come out of the truck. Joss looked down and sighed. John smiles even more. "That's the beauty of it David, we are taking Nessie to the waters but did I say anything about the Loch Ness? David tilts his head and looked at John. "Wow, these cops are not as bright aren't they"? said David when he straightened his head. "Yep that was the plan from the very beginning." said John. "So now we drive Nessie to the North Atlantic ocean so it can be free." "I call shotgun" said David. "Fine" said John smiling once more.
As the Scotland police force arrived to the Loch Ness. They have been waiting for the thieves to show up. "Where are they?" Asked the commanding officer, "They didn't come, because that wasn't part of their plan" said the mysterious man. The entire Police squad turned their heads. "Who are you?" asked Johnson. "That's of no importance to you besides there's something else you need to worry about, like letting the beast escape." said the cloaked man angrily. "We are terribly sorry we tried to"- "No excuses gentlemen, we forgive your mistakes. And besides our top scientists have a new monster to catch. "who? Asked Johnson. The unknown man just smiled and said "let's just say if these ''criminals'' are going find this monster we're looking for they're going to have their feet wet." Johnson stared in confusion.
Three months later... "After 3 months of the loss of the wondrous beast Nessie, new information has been found saying that in the Atlantic ocean, which is guarded by the military's top men, the giant squid Kraken has been found. T.V turns off. "Team! Pack your bags, we are going on a trip to the tropics." said John grinning.
2 years later after the capture of Nessie, the government had decided to make a theme park for the loch ness Monster. The rides were called The roller coaster of the deep, the candy's were called candy beast, corn teeth etc, and the main attraction is the Loch Ness Monster itself... "Mommy, Mommy! I want to touch it"! Said the thrilled little girl, No!! Don't do it sweetie it's going to bite you! Said the frightful mother, but mom!! Please!" "I said no and that's final, now let's go find your father," "aww.. The girl looked back while walking away with her mother and said, bye bye dolphin!"
Later on that day as the youthful and energetic child is passing by the people with her mother, she notices on the corner of her eye that there is a group of adults in black clothes with huge gym bags, walking toward where the loch ness monster's water prison was held.
"We are in position, over" said the mysterious man. "Roger that, Eve out" said the woman on the man's radio "Ok guys, you know what to do, let's go. Said the man in the black clothes. "Hey boss I was just wonde- "I told you before David, my name is John, understand?" "yeah I understand" said David. "Anyway, I was wondering, when we find Nes (Nessie) what do we do next?" "let just ask you this, where were you when we had this discussion with the whole group?" asked john with a disappointed face. "Umm..
I was in the bathroom?" *John sighs* ok, lets recap quickly cause we are almost there," "ok we rigged the place around Nes's cage, and when I push this button in my pocket, the explosives underground will blow up, but before that could happen we have to attach ropes on the holders of the cage so we can drop Nes down safely, then when we are at the bottom there is going to be a cargo truck waiting, then we put Nes in there and we drive straight towards the waters. Ok?" said John "yeah I'm good, just one question though how can we get the ropes to the cage if its too high to reach, asked David." "Don't worry about that, we have a few friends on the inside. John pointed toward where the employers where feeding Nessie. "They are one of us" John said, you don't have to worry about them. "Ok I got the plan" said David. "Good, now let's get this show on the road." Said John with an eager smile.
John places his hand on the radio. "Ok... start the truck" "Roger that John, we'll see you at the bottom over" said Eve. "Alright ready David, Joss?" "Ready!" said Joss and David. John presses the button. An explosive goes off. Everyone started to scream hysterically begins running away to the exit. "Ok team! We have a few seconds till the cops start showing up, get in positions everyone!" Said john. Everyone climbed the two ladders that were on the side of the enclosed glass, they wrapped the ropes on the handlers of the cage and threw it to the metal supporters, they grabbed the rope and tied a knot. As they were going though the ground they saw the cops had already shown up and started firing.
One of the cops starts to shoot "Seize fire! Seize fire! We cannot harm the monster!" Said the commanding officer. "So what?! if we shoot it, the men in white were experimenting this thing when they were "researching" it. And look, it hardly has a scratch on its skin." Said one of the police officers. The commanding officer stayed silent. Upset, the officer got the speaker and told everyone to start firing. Gunshots were flying though the air. "John! Why are they shooting?! Asked David "I don't know! I think they don't care if they kill Nes, everyone pull out your weapon's and shields! we have to protect it! As John made the call to tell his team to pull out their arsenals gunshots were blazing though the air.
One of the gunshots penetrated the glassed prison. "Damn it! Hold on Nessie we're almost there! Said John. "Sir! They're escaping, "I know already Johnson! We have to go to the loch that's where they are heading, lets go officers! Said the commanding chief. "Yo John, why are they retreating? Asked David. "They are going to the loch, John smirking a smile. "Um, dude why are you smiling? that's bad! all the cops are going to be there, we'll be sitting ducks if we come out of the truck. Joss looked down and sighed. John smiles even more. "That's the beauty of it David, we are taking Nessie to the waters but did I say anything about the Loch Ness? David tilts his head and looked at John. "Wow, these cops are not as bright aren't they"? said David when he straightened his head. "Yep that was the plan from the very beginning." said John. "So now we drive Nessie to the North Atlantic ocean so it can be free." "I call shotgun" said David. "Fine" said John smiling once more.
As the Scotland police force arrived to the Loch Ness. They have been waiting for the thieves to show up. "Where are they?" Asked the commanding officer, "They didn't come, because that wasn't part of their plan" said the mysterious man. The entire Police squad turned their heads. "Who are you?" asked Johnson. "That's of no importance to you besides there's something else you need to worry about, like letting the beast escape." said the cloaked man angrily. "We are terribly sorry we tried to"- "No excuses gentlemen, we forgive your mistakes. And besides our top scientists have a new monster to catch. "who? Asked Johnson. The unknown man just smiled and said "let's just say if these ''criminals'' are going find this monster we're looking for they're going to have their feet wet." Johnson stared in confusion.
Three months later... "After 3 months of the loss of the wondrous beast Nessie, new information has been found saying that in the Atlantic ocean, which is guarded by the military's top men, the giant squid Kraken has been found. T.V turns off. "Team! Pack your bags, we are going on a trip to the tropics." said John grinning.
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