Telepathic with a Twist 2
Sorry if there's too much fighting but its a bit of an action story too. This ones longer than the first one. Sorry again.
Eventually the police van rumbled to a halt and one of the men from earlier opened the door flooding the back of the van with light. Outside I could see a huge house with LOTS of windows... Wait a minute, a house, they are seriously going to try and hold me prisoner in a house. I rolled my blue eyes at the thought . It wouldn't take me 2 minutes to escape from here.
"You're too young to hold in a prison so a very nice man gave the police force a donation of money to keep you here. There will be others staying here too but I think only one of them was wanted by the police like you. Don't even think of escaping because its miles and miles until you’ll reach another house and the SWAT team will have caught you again before you get there."
The man explained.
Sheesh, the police SOLD me to someone else because I’m too young to hold in a prison. The man reached into the van to grab my wrist and take me in the house.
"Don't touch me" I hissed. I guess I’m still a little angry that they caught me. The man moved to the side as I stood up and came out of the van. We were walking to the house and I was looking for an escape but the man must of seen my eyes darting from one side of the house to the other because he put his hand on my shoulder to restrain me. I whirled round to face him and punched him in the face.
"I said don't touch me!" I hissed again. Four men got out of the police van and were running towards me. I kicked the first one, he went flying back and knocked into the second man. As the third came running towards me I twirled out of his way and tripped him up so he went flying over the grass garden and landed on his stomach. The fourth man didn't even come close to me. He just stood there frozen on the spot with eyes wide in shock. I don't know why they always Seemed so shocked. You'd have thought that if a teenage girl had been on the polices most wanted list for three years then she obviously knew how to fight. But no. They were always shocked.
I got out of my crouched position and dusted off the knees of my black cargo trousers. Then turned and began to walk towards the house on my own. The massive oak front door to the house was open and there were three other kids that seemed about my age staring at me. Well three of the kids were staring at me. There's a boy -black hair falling in his blue eyes, good muscles and who is really, really good looking. probably about 17 years old- just leaning against the wall with his arms folded and a bored expression on his face. I’m guessing he’s the other one that the police caught. When I get inside the house a man with white hair and a white suit walks down the hallway and greets me.
"Well, its nice to finally meet you Hannah. I’m Mr. Patron ." he looked over my shoulder and saw the five SWAT team men lying on the floor. his eyes went wide. " ummm. Why don't you four kids go down the hall way and through the first door to you're right. I’ll be with you in a moment after I take care of this... situation." he said
And with that Mr. Patron walked out the door and towards the SWAT team men while we went through the door that he said. Inside the room was a cream sofa with a coffee table and a small TV in front of it. There were two darker corners in the room and because I robbed banks I preferred shadows I walked towards one of the corners and hid myself in the shadows. The boy that I looked at earlier did the same but in the other corner. the girl and boy that was left went and sat on the sofa. I could feel their eyes watching me but I paid no attention to them even though it made me really nervous. Mr. Patron soon came into the room and turned the T.V on.
"Now, you're all here because you each have you're own special gift." he said while I took in a shocked gasp. I’d never told anyone about me being telepathic so how had he found out?.
"We have brought you here so that you can learn to control you're gifts and build up you're power. I’ve been researching each of you for awhile now and we recorded videos of how you came here . We will watch each others tapes to get to know one another better." Mr. Patron finished his little speech and picked up the remote for the TV and pressed play.
The first video was about the boy sat on the couch who was apparently called Matt. The video showed a man walking down a school corridor towards the principles office . When the man was inside the office there was a short stubborn looking women sat in a big leather chair on one side of a freakishly tidy desk and on the other side was a teenage boy with long blonde hair, nicely built muscle and a slight tilt to his chin that gave him an arrogant look. The camera man sat next to matt who turned to face him with a puzzled look on his face. The rest of the video was just the camera man asking matt lots of questions and explaining about Mr. Patron setting up the house to help research teenagers with "special gifts".
The second video was a girl called Victoria who was sat on the couch next to matt. The camera man was stood outside a huge mansion with massive green gates blocking his way. He nudged them open and began to walk towards the ivory covered mansion, he got to the door and rang the doorbell. A loud chiming sound echoed trough the house and when it stopped a slender women opened the door behind her was a girl with long brown hair, a slim figure and a heart shaped face that made her look cute. I'm guessing that was Victoria seen as it looked exactly like the girl on the couch sat next to matt. The camera man asked her the exact same questions and explained the exact same thing that he did with Matt.
I was getting kinda bored of hearing the same thing again so I started to look around the room.
M.R patron was staring at Victoria and Matt, it looked like he was trying to work something out. Because I was so bored I decided to take a little peek at what was going on inside his head. I didn't usually use my "gift" to read peoples minds because I always found some thought inside their head which I wish Id never heard. but I was so bored I made an exception. I dropped all the walls that I kept around my mind and concentrated on Mr. patron. I couldn't hear a single thing. My eyes went wide with shock- which was really saying something because the only real emotion Id ever felt since my parents abandoned me was a cold indifference, I guess you could of said I had a heart of ice. But right now I was utterly shocked Id always been able to read peoples minds.
I concentrated harder on Mr. patron and I could feel the walls around his mind waver a bit but just as I was going to read his mind the third video on the TV caught my attention and I forgot about Mr. patron.
The boy that was stood in the other dark corner of the room was also now on the small TV . The video showed 10 SWAT team men surrounding the boy in a tight circle. They had practically chained him up!. There were handcuffs all over him. but when they lifted him up to put him in the police van he still manage to knock 5 of the men unconscious . He was throwing kicks everywhere and he was moving so fast you could hardly see him. I mean seriously this guy had some major fighting skills and brilliant speed. When the remaining SWAT team men finally managed to tackle him to the ground and throw him in the police van they looked really worn out.
When his video finished and mine started to come on I turned away and stared at the boy. They hadn't asked him anything and they hadn’t explained anything to him just like they didn't with me but what I really wanted to know was how he managed to fight like that. Even I couldn't fight like that and I was considered deadly. Although I don't think I was ever really deadly.
"You're too young to hold in a prison so a very nice man gave the police force a donation of money to keep you here. There will be others staying here too but I think only one of them was wanted by the police like you. Don't even think of escaping because its miles and miles until you’ll reach another house and the SWAT team will have caught you again before you get there."
The man explained.
Sheesh, the police SOLD me to someone else because I’m too young to hold in a prison. The man reached into the van to grab my wrist and take me in the house.
"Don't touch me" I hissed. I guess I’m still a little angry that they caught me. The man moved to the side as I stood up and came out of the van. We were walking to the house and I was looking for an escape but the man must of seen my eyes darting from one side of the house to the other because he put his hand on my shoulder to restrain me. I whirled round to face him and punched him in the face.
"I said don't touch me!" I hissed again. Four men got out of the police van and were running towards me. I kicked the first one, he went flying back and knocked into the second man. As the third came running towards me I twirled out of his way and tripped him up so he went flying over the grass garden and landed on his stomach. The fourth man didn't even come close to me. He just stood there frozen on the spot with eyes wide in shock. I don't know why they always Seemed so shocked. You'd have thought that if a teenage girl had been on the polices most wanted list for three years then she obviously knew how to fight. But no. They were always shocked.
I got out of my crouched position and dusted off the knees of my black cargo trousers. Then turned and began to walk towards the house on my own. The massive oak front door to the house was open and there were three other kids that seemed about my age staring at me. Well three of the kids were staring at me. There's a boy -black hair falling in his blue eyes, good muscles and who is really, really good looking. probably about 17 years old- just leaning against the wall with his arms folded and a bored expression on his face. I’m guessing he’s the other one that the police caught. When I get inside the house a man with white hair and a white suit walks down the hallway and greets me.
"Well, its nice to finally meet you Hannah. I’m Mr. Patron ." he looked over my shoulder and saw the five SWAT team men lying on the floor. his eyes went wide. " ummm. Why don't you four kids go down the hall way and through the first door to you're right. I’ll be with you in a moment after I take care of this... situation." he said
And with that Mr. Patron walked out the door and towards the SWAT team men while we went through the door that he said. Inside the room was a cream sofa with a coffee table and a small TV in front of it. There were two darker corners in the room and because I robbed banks I preferred shadows I walked towards one of the corners and hid myself in the shadows. The boy that I looked at earlier did the same but in the other corner. the girl and boy that was left went and sat on the sofa. I could feel their eyes watching me but I paid no attention to them even though it made me really nervous. Mr. Patron soon came into the room and turned the T.V on.
"Now, you're all here because you each have you're own special gift." he said while I took in a shocked gasp. I’d never told anyone about me being telepathic so how had he found out?.
"We have brought you here so that you can learn to control you're gifts and build up you're power. I’ve been researching each of you for awhile now and we recorded videos of how you came here . We will watch each others tapes to get to know one another better." Mr. Patron finished his little speech and picked up the remote for the TV and pressed play.
The first video was about the boy sat on the couch who was apparently called Matt. The video showed a man walking down a school corridor towards the principles office . When the man was inside the office there was a short stubborn looking women sat in a big leather chair on one side of a freakishly tidy desk and on the other side was a teenage boy with long blonde hair, nicely built muscle and a slight tilt to his chin that gave him an arrogant look. The camera man sat next to matt who turned to face him with a puzzled look on his face. The rest of the video was just the camera man asking matt lots of questions and explaining about Mr. Patron setting up the house to help research teenagers with "special gifts".
The second video was a girl called Victoria who was sat on the couch next to matt. The camera man was stood outside a huge mansion with massive green gates blocking his way. He nudged them open and began to walk towards the ivory covered mansion, he got to the door and rang the doorbell. A loud chiming sound echoed trough the house and when it stopped a slender women opened the door behind her was a girl with long brown hair, a slim figure and a heart shaped face that made her look cute. I'm guessing that was Victoria seen as it looked exactly like the girl on the couch sat next to matt. The camera man asked her the exact same questions and explained the exact same thing that he did with Matt.
I was getting kinda bored of hearing the same thing again so I started to look around the room.
M.R patron was staring at Victoria and Matt, it looked like he was trying to work something out. Because I was so bored I decided to take a little peek at what was going on inside his head. I didn't usually use my "gift" to read peoples minds because I always found some thought inside their head which I wish Id never heard. but I was so bored I made an exception. I dropped all the walls that I kept around my mind and concentrated on Mr. patron. I couldn't hear a single thing. My eyes went wide with shock- which was really saying something because the only real emotion Id ever felt since my parents abandoned me was a cold indifference, I guess you could of said I had a heart of ice. But right now I was utterly shocked Id always been able to read peoples minds.
I concentrated harder on Mr. patron and I could feel the walls around his mind waver a bit but just as I was going to read his mind the third video on the TV caught my attention and I forgot about Mr. patron.
The boy that was stood in the other dark corner of the room was also now on the small TV . The video showed 10 SWAT team men surrounding the boy in a tight circle. They had practically chained him up!. There were handcuffs all over him. but when they lifted him up to put him in the police van he still manage to knock 5 of the men unconscious . He was throwing kicks everywhere and he was moving so fast you could hardly see him. I mean seriously this guy had some major fighting skills and brilliant speed. When the remaining SWAT team men finally managed to tackle him to the ground and throw him in the police van they looked really worn out.
When his video finished and mine started to come on I turned away and stared at the boy. They hadn't asked him anything and they hadn’t explained anything to him just like they didn't with me but what I really wanted to know was how he managed to fight like that. Even I couldn't fight like that and I was considered deadly. Although I don't think I was ever really deadly.

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