Talk To Me

It's still a rough draft and I wanna see how you guys take it--but it's pretty much about a crush(: sooo comment!
Talk to me.
Please, Just say hi
Come on, tell me anything
If you don’t I just might cry.

All you do is stare at me
Whenever you pass by
Why can’t you just say hi to me?
If you don’t I’ll surely die.

This feeling that I have for you
Is becoming a bumpy ride,
And there’s lightning that goes through me
Whenever you look me in the eyes

Your presence throttles me
And my mind goes towards the sky
My heart doesn’t even pound for me
And the air my lungs defy

I wonder if you have the same feelings,
And you’re just too scared to confide,
If. You. Would. Just. SPEAK to me
So I could See if we were on the same side

The only thing I’d be scared to hear,
Words my ears would easily deny,
Is the moment when your lips would reveal
That you’re telling me good-bye.
Do you like it?
It needs some work
It's okay/alright- minor changes
It's perfect so keep it the way it is.
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Published: 10/18/2010
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