Sweet Whispers
It's my first story so please go easy on me.... let me know what you think..... oh and please forgive my grammar and spelling
The party was loud and we had all been drinking for quite sometime. The night seemed endless... My stomach however didn't feel so endless and the beer began to take its toll... And I just knew it was going to come back up. Not wanting anyone to see me get sick, I walked away from the party and down the hill to the barn... Knowing that I could probably hide behind it safely and get sick. As I walked through the crisp night air and the sounds of the party fell away from my ears I started to feel a little better. Maybe all I needed was a fresh breath of air. I continued my walk down to the barn and found an old well there, I was thirsty for something other than beer and found the thought of water to be quite appealing. I began to pump the old well handle and before long freshwater pour out onto to ground. I bent down and cupped my hands and got a big drink of the cool refreshing water. I heard a noise from behind me and when I turned to face it I found to my surprise the most beautiful horse I had ever seen.
His nose was soft and cool to the touch, he was tall boy much bigger than any horse I had seen. His muscles flexed under is soft black hair as he moved into the feel of my hand. He blinked once while looking at me and through the corner of my eyes I could see his tail sweep up and down scarying away any insects that might bite him. "good boy" I said as I pet his nose well holding his head in my hand. I heard footsteps behind me and as I turned to meet the person coming toward me the horse stepped back. I was struck instantly with familiarity but couldn't place it. He came up to stand next to me. I turned back to where the horse had been standing letting a shot sigh out seeing that he was no longer there were I could pet him. "he's never taken to anyone like that before" the man standing next to me said. I couldn't hold the question back any longer I simply needed to know who this person was i quickly asked him who he was. He informed me that we had met earlier and that he was the host older brother Sean. She let the tight breath she'd been holding in escape from her lips and relaxed a little. "Why aren't you in there partying? He asked there was no way that she was going to tell this handsome man that about 20 mins ago she felt like she was going to be ill so she came over here so that she could get sick. She thought quickly and said "I saw the horse and wanted to pet him" it was believable."
"What's his name?" "jack. What is your name?" she answered Maxine. That's a pretty name he said as he turned to look at her. She smiled, blushed and said thank you. He reached up and tucked a stray piece of hair behind her ear and as his fingers slid down he lifted her chin. Pretty name for a pretty girl. She was red as could be and was suddenly very glad that it was very dark where they were standing. The horse had slowly started to make his way back over and he took that moment to decide that he wanted their attention.
He let out a soft winny that turned both their heads. She smiled big. She simply loved that sound. She saw Sean staring at her out of the corner of her eye. She called for the horse to come to her she wanted to pet him again. Sean made this strange clicking noise with his mouth and the horse trotted up to them. "How'd you do that?" maybe I will teach you sometime. He smiled down at her. She reached out and gently began petting the horse's nose again. She was enjoying herself much more than she had been, when she was in the house partying and drinking. However now that the beer was starting to wear off she was getting a little cold, but didn't want to go back into the house.
A cold chill went through the air and she shivered. Without hesitation Sean took his sweatshirt off and handed it to her. I couldn't she said and tried to give it back to him. " take it I don't want you to be cold" "your being silly... I'm not cold". Just then another cold chill went through the air and she shivered again. He looked down at her with knowing eyes. She took the sweatshirt and pulled it over her head and said thank you. She went on tiptoe and kissed him on the cheek.
Then she turned back to continue petting the horse when she noticed another one. How many horse do you have? Maxine asked. Six and one is pregnant. She turned and smiled to him. Really? Yup he said smiling back. "Which one?" she's not here in these stables... But I will take you to them if you want to see her" Maxine thought about this and decided there couldn't be any harm in it the guy had been a perfect gentleman so far.
His nose was soft and cool to the touch, he was tall boy much bigger than any horse I had seen. His muscles flexed under is soft black hair as he moved into the feel of my hand. He blinked once while looking at me and through the corner of my eyes I could see his tail sweep up and down scarying away any insects that might bite him. "good boy" I said as I pet his nose well holding his head in my hand. I heard footsteps behind me and as I turned to meet the person coming toward me the horse stepped back. I was struck instantly with familiarity but couldn't place it. He came up to stand next to me. I turned back to where the horse had been standing letting a shot sigh out seeing that he was no longer there were I could pet him. "he's never taken to anyone like that before" the man standing next to me said. I couldn't hold the question back any longer I simply needed to know who this person was i quickly asked him who he was. He informed me that we had met earlier and that he was the host older brother Sean. She let the tight breath she'd been holding in escape from her lips and relaxed a little. "Why aren't you in there partying? He asked there was no way that she was going to tell this handsome man that about 20 mins ago she felt like she was going to be ill so she came over here so that she could get sick. She thought quickly and said "I saw the horse and wanted to pet him" it was believable."
"What's his name?" "jack. What is your name?" she answered Maxine. That's a pretty name he said as he turned to look at her. She smiled, blushed and said thank you. He reached up and tucked a stray piece of hair behind her ear and as his fingers slid down he lifted her chin. Pretty name for a pretty girl. She was red as could be and was suddenly very glad that it was very dark where they were standing. The horse had slowly started to make his way back over and he took that moment to decide that he wanted their attention.
He let out a soft winny that turned both their heads. She smiled big. She simply loved that sound. She saw Sean staring at her out of the corner of her eye. She called for the horse to come to her she wanted to pet him again. Sean made this strange clicking noise with his mouth and the horse trotted up to them. "How'd you do that?" maybe I will teach you sometime. He smiled down at her. She reached out and gently began petting the horse's nose again. She was enjoying herself much more than she had been, when she was in the house partying and drinking. However now that the beer was starting to wear off she was getting a little cold, but didn't want to go back into the house.
A cold chill went through the air and she shivered. Without hesitation Sean took his sweatshirt off and handed it to her. I couldn't she said and tried to give it back to him. " take it I don't want you to be cold" "your being silly... I'm not cold". Just then another cold chill went through the air and she shivered again. He looked down at her with knowing eyes. She took the sweatshirt and pulled it over her head and said thank you. She went on tiptoe and kissed him on the cheek.
Then she turned back to continue petting the horse when she noticed another one. How many horse do you have? Maxine asked. Six and one is pregnant. She turned and smiled to him. Really? Yup he said smiling back. "Which one?" she's not here in these stables... But I will take you to them if you want to see her" Maxine thought about this and decided there couldn't be any harm in it the guy had been a perfect gentleman so far.
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