Sweet Whispers (Chapter 1 Re-Written)
Sorry guys I had to re-write it.... I couldn't handle it
I let the tight breath I'd been holding out and relaxed a little. "Why aren't you in there partying?" Sean asked her. there was no way that I was going to tell this handsome man that about 20 mins ago I felt like I was going to be ill so I came over here so that I could get sick. I thought quickly and said "I saw the horse and wanted to pet him" it was believable."
"What's his name?" "jack. What is your name?" "Maxine" I answered. That's a pretty name Sean said as he turned to look at her. I smiled, blushed and said thank you. He reached up and tucked a stray piece of hair behind my ear and as his fingers slid down he lifted my chin. "Pretty name for a pretty girl." I was red as could be and was suddenly very glad that it was very dark where we were standing. The horse had slowly started to make his way back over and he took that moment to decide that he wanted our attention.
He let out a soft whinny that turned both our heads. I smiled big. I simply love that sound. I saw him staring at me out of the corner of my eye. Try to find some kind of distraction, I called for the horse to come to me. I really wanted to pet him again. Sean made this strange clicking noise with his mouth and the horse trotted up to us. "How'd you do that?" I asked. "maybe I will teach you sometime. Sean said then smiled down at me. I reached out to gently being petting the horse's nose again. I was truly enjoying myself much more than I had been, when I was in the house partying and drinking. However now that the beer was starting to wear off I was starting to get a little cold, but I didn't want to go back into the house.
A cold chill went through the air and I shivered. Without hesitation I watched as Sean took his sweatshirt off and went to hand it to me. "I couldn't" I told him and tried to give it back. "take it I don't want you to be cold" "your being silly... I'm not cold". Just then another cold chill went through the air and of course I shivered again. He looked down at me with knowing eyes. I gave up took the sweatshirt and pulled it over my head and said thank you. I decided to take a chance, maybe it was the beer but I went on tiptoe and kissed him on the cheek.
Then I turned back to continue petting the horse, I felt like I was going to die I couldn't believe that I did that! That's when I noticed another horse. "How many horse do you have?" I asked. I wanted to talk about something I felt awkward now. "Six and one is pregnant." I turned and smiled to him. "Really?" "Yup" he said smiling back. "Which one?" I asked him glad for something to talk about. "She's not here in these stables... But I will take you to them if you want to see her" Sean told me. I thought about this and decided there couldn't be any harm in it, the guy had been a perfect gentleman so far.
"What's his name?" "jack. What is your name?" "Maxine" I answered. That's a pretty name Sean said as he turned to look at her. I smiled, blushed and said thank you. He reached up and tucked a stray piece of hair behind my ear and as his fingers slid down he lifted my chin. "Pretty name for a pretty girl." I was red as could be and was suddenly very glad that it was very dark where we were standing. The horse had slowly started to make his way back over and he took that moment to decide that he wanted our attention.
He let out a soft whinny that turned both our heads. I smiled big. I simply love that sound. I saw him staring at me out of the corner of my eye. Try to find some kind of distraction, I called for the horse to come to me. I really wanted to pet him again. Sean made this strange clicking noise with his mouth and the horse trotted up to us. "How'd you do that?" I asked. "maybe I will teach you sometime. Sean said then smiled down at me. I reached out to gently being petting the horse's nose again. I was truly enjoying myself much more than I had been, when I was in the house partying and drinking. However now that the beer was starting to wear off I was starting to get a little cold, but I didn't want to go back into the house.
A cold chill went through the air and I shivered. Without hesitation I watched as Sean took his sweatshirt off and went to hand it to me. "I couldn't" I told him and tried to give it back. "take it I don't want you to be cold" "your being silly... I'm not cold". Just then another cold chill went through the air and of course I shivered again. He looked down at me with knowing eyes. I gave up took the sweatshirt and pulled it over my head and said thank you. I decided to take a chance, maybe it was the beer but I went on tiptoe and kissed him on the cheek.
Then I turned back to continue petting the horse, I felt like I was going to die I couldn't believe that I did that! That's when I noticed another horse. "How many horse do you have?" I asked. I wanted to talk about something I felt awkward now. "Six and one is pregnant." I turned and smiled to him. "Really?" "Yup" he said smiling back. "Which one?" I asked him glad for something to talk about. "She's not here in these stables... But I will take you to them if you want to see her" Sean told me. I thought about this and decided there couldn't be any harm in it, the guy had been a perfect gentleman so far.
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