Sweet Sixteen - Part 10
Last part... sorry it ended really short.
February 1, 2011
I went to school feeling gloomy. It’s been awhile since I’ve seen Chris. I thought he might be avoiding me. Every time I ask for him, he’d be out or busy.
But… recently I’ve found out that he’s gone to his old school for some things. All he’d told his mother was that he had things to take care of. So, now I was feeling unusually unhappy… I wasn’t used to not seeing him everyday.
At school, all I did was think about what he might be doing at this moment. It angered me… knowing that he would just leave without telling me. Even his phone was turned off.
So after school you can imagine how surprised I was to see him standing at the school gates, his hands in his pockets… and his eyes glued on me. A smile formed across his face.
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Christopher’s POV
I smiled as I saw her coming out of the school building. She stopped, looked at me… then walked away as if I were a total stranger. I snorted, and caught her arm before she could run off.
"It’s been awhile you know," I said.
"Shut up!! You skipped a lot of classes and you didn’t even bother tell me you were going… hey, what business did you have in your old school?"
"I thought you didn’t care. You never really answered me back when I confessed to you like an idiot."
"You never really gave me a chance," she mumbled.
I smiled and pulled her to my new silver BMW car. She eyed me with wide eyes. "You can drive? Is this new?"
"Yea but my dad taught me how to drive so I don’t really have a license."
"What?! I’m not getting in there with you!"
I plan to take care of this girl while I’m still here. I don’t know how or when, but Sandra has become more important than my own life. I will protect her… definitely.
"So?" I asked, as we got out of the car.
"Woah! The seaside! I’ve been wanting to come here for a while."
I caught her arm before she could go off again. "Not that. Are you willing to be my girl?"
She laughed. "Are you proposing to me?"
I frowned. "I’m serious."
"On one condition…" She said.
I waited for her to continue but she only smiled. "What?" I encouraged.
"You are not allowed to leave me ever… without telling me."
"And you’re not allowed to ever look at another man," I said. She looked puzzled, and I took that chance to kiss her. She wrapped her arms around my neck and I pulled her closer.
You really don’t know how much you’ve changed me in your crazy ways… I thought…
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Note:
So I added Christopher's POV because Lucy asked me to (hope you liked it)... Oh and please tell me what you think of the story. I changed a lot of things... since I had this written originally last year. I was told by one of my friends that the original one was nicer, but I just couldn't help changing it.
I went to school feeling gloomy. It’s been awhile since I’ve seen Chris. I thought he might be avoiding me. Every time I ask for him, he’d be out or busy.
But… recently I’ve found out that he’s gone to his old school for some things. All he’d told his mother was that he had things to take care of. So, now I was feeling unusually unhappy… I wasn’t used to not seeing him everyday.
At school, all I did was think about what he might be doing at this moment. It angered me… knowing that he would just leave without telling me. Even his phone was turned off.
So after school you can imagine how surprised I was to see him standing at the school gates, his hands in his pockets… and his eyes glued on me. A smile formed across his face.
**************************************************************
Christopher’s POV
I smiled as I saw her coming out of the school building. She stopped, looked at me… then walked away as if I were a total stranger. I snorted, and caught her arm before she could run off.
"It’s been awhile you know," I said.
"Shut up!! You skipped a lot of classes and you didn’t even bother tell me you were going… hey, what business did you have in your old school?"
"I thought you didn’t care. You never really answered me back when I confessed to you like an idiot."
"You never really gave me a chance," she mumbled.
I smiled and pulled her to my new silver BMW car. She eyed me with wide eyes. "You can drive? Is this new?"
"Yea but my dad taught me how to drive so I don’t really have a license."
"What?! I’m not getting in there with you!"
I plan to take care of this girl while I’m still here. I don’t know how or when, but Sandra has become more important than my own life. I will protect her… definitely.
"So?" I asked, as we got out of the car.
"Woah! The seaside! I’ve been wanting to come here for a while."
I caught her arm before she could go off again. "Not that. Are you willing to be my girl?"
She laughed. "Are you proposing to me?"
I frowned. "I’m serious."
"On one condition…" She said.
I waited for her to continue but she only smiled. "What?" I encouraged.
"You are not allowed to leave me ever… without telling me."
"And you’re not allowed to ever look at another man," I said. She looked puzzled, and I took that chance to kiss her. She wrapped her arms around my neck and I pulled her closer.
You really don’t know how much you’ve changed me in your crazy ways… I thought…
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Note:
So I added Christopher's POV because Lucy asked me to (hope you liked it)... Oh and please tell me what you think of the story. I changed a lot of things... since I had this written originally last year. I was told by one of my friends that the original one was nicer, but I just couldn't help changing it.
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