Sweet Sixteen (Note)

Sequel?
Ok so I decided that may be I should make this story longer and add a little suspense and new things in it. Like about Christopher's past... Ok I have a lot of ideas on it... that is if I don't run out of ideas too soon...

I'll write part of it now: The sequel will be called 'Bittersweet'.

"Christopher Alexanders... you are to come back for college. If you don't, that girl will be harmed," my father's voice echoed through the room silencing everyone. My father works for a secret organization and I am the only one who knows about it. Even my mother doesn’t know about it.

His workplace is like any normal office, but it’s all just a disguise. Recently he’s gone back to New York for a new case, and it seems like there’s a lot of commotion. A lot of murders are happening and he’s already found three victims… beaten to a pulp.

Turns out, I have to join the organization once I turn 18 just because I’ve found out about it. It’s bad enough he’s been teaching me how to use a gun a few weeks ago. Ever since I was 12 he’d given me intense trainings. I’ve kept silent about it to avoid problems but I never thought all those trainings were for me to join them.

I went back to my old school 3 months ago to see my old classmate, James. Apparently, his father is from the organization as well… and he himself willingly decided to become one of them soon.

"If you decide to stay I have no right to say anything, but remember I’ve already warned you. You know a secret you shouldn’t have. I know it’s also because of my carelessness but if anyone finds out about our real identity it will cause chaos and this organization will get destroyed. In your case, you are my son… and there’s a girl you are trying to protect. Don’t you think you’ll be pulling her into all this too? I’m just trying to help you."

I thought of Sandra a lot. Back before I met her I was a stupid bastard… and I’m admitting it. I was mean to a lot of girls, and never considered their feelings. I thought they were all the same…but Sandra proved me wrong. She is kind but strong as well… maybe not physically… but she’s definitely emotionally strong.

So, I’ve made up my mind to protect her even if leaving her hurts…
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My sister thinks I should make a sequel and she also thought the ending was a little weak... so I'm making one now. But I want to know if you guys think I should post it or not? I'm gonna write it anyway, and if I do post this story then I'd have to write my other story 'Air' after I'm most likely done with this.
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Published: 11/30/2011
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