Stiff, Painted, Hollow

I wrote this feeling confusion, out of control and nothingness. Not a good time in my life. Let me know what you think.. xo
I should be in control of my life
Instead I feel more like a doll.
Stiff, painted and hollow.
The only life I possess
A mind full of thoughts
Tangled in a web of confusion.
I do my best to show how I feel
By achieving thinness!
I'll feed on my insides
Till I’m a walking cavity.
A plastic image of the girl I strive to be.
I feel plastic and attract attention
So why do I feel more lonely than ever?

By Niv Star
Published: 6/12/2007		 Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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