Sonnet 147
In 10th grade my acting teacher made my class rephrase sonnet 147 (My Love Is As A Fever Longing Still) by William Shakespeare; in to our own words. We were obligated to do this so we could get a better understanding to Shakespeare's world at play and believe it or not it helped us in acting. Anyway this is my version of Sonnet 147 enjoy =)
The temptation for you burns
Burns so deep that my heart skips a beat and it isn't very pleased
As if I had a choice my heart feeds off of you
In a sickening way its continues to want more
You've become the only thing my love wants
It's irritating to know that I'm breaking because of you
But there are no more strings to hold on to, you cut them off
Now I'm free wishing I was still connected
Now I fall only wanting death that you approve on
There is no cure for me now and I'm past caring
I'm going crazy and can't dream another night
I've gone completely insane
Expressing random crap
I thought you were different I thought you were breathtaking
But I see it was just a front to cover up
Your disability to love because all you can do is hate.
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