Silence Changes Everything

Please comment..I'm only 14 and I want to know how my work is....I want to be a writer :)
When everything is silent,
Nothing is the same
I'm in a dark room with him
But silence is all you hear
I feel as if I were about to cry
I want to say sorry but I'm not sure I know how
I open my mouth but nothing comes out
I try one more time,
Nothing
I put my head down
Hoping that you get the fact that ashamed
And sorry
I was hoping that the silence would break
By you saying it would be okay
Finally the silence was broken
But instead of by you,
The silence was broken by the shut of the door
I look up.....
..........your gone

By shannon freeman
Published: 9/10/2009		 Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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