Shouldd I Continue? <3

A Teaser To My Newww Story "A Love That's Cold". Comment &Tell Me If I Should Continuee!! (:
His cold, moist lips were only a few inches from mine. I could feel his hot breath pass my mouth and slide across my cheeks. My respiring was uneven -I panted as his index finger pushed a strand of hair behind my ear. "You're beautiful." He whispered -I almost lost my control when his finger reached my neck. His rough hand's touch sent shivers throughout my body. I closed my eyes and focused on his body progresses. My hand that was pinned against the wall went numb and I used my free one to grab his right arm. His muscles were firm; just the right size for a seventeen year old. He had a gorgeous olive-complexioned face: Deep brown eyes and short, black textured hair -which fit so well with his heart-shaped face. His jaw line was striking. He lifted my chin. I couldn't wait any longer. I tightened the grip on his arm and pressed my lips against his. By each kiss, I understood his mocking ways more. He had already captured me. It was truly unbelievable.

"Stop." I pulled away and caught my breath. "I won't do this." I waited for his response. I thought he would say something quickly, but he was quiet. I could tell that some kind of plan was forming inside his mischievous mind. Finally, he said, "How could I trust that when you can't even bring yourself to push me away?" He continued his devilish task; it sank in that he was just teasing me like always, when a smirk appeared at the corner of his mouth. When I noticed it, I broke his hold of me -my wrist still hot from his grip.

"Stop it." I demanded -fighting the urge. My knees weakened and gave out. He caught me in his arms and chuckled at my pitiful display.

Who would have ever imagined that I would be in this situation? The only exciting thing that has ever happened to me occurred two years ago when I got my first job at Hillcrest Lakes' Cafe. Everything was amazing...until recently. Only a week ago did I have a perfect life, but all of that changed when he came here; a devil's server straight from hell. He ruined my happy life.
Should I Continue?
Yes, I Want To Read More!!!! >.>
Nooo
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Published: 10/9/2010
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