Seeing Red
Was bored and just decided to write this story, hope you like it!
A nice little girl, aged 9, is very mature for her age. She does things that are way beyond her level of expertise, for example she is already interested in finding her course in life, and she wants to be a film director or a reporter as she is interested in all of that knowledge that bores her parents.
Also she speaks like an adult and uses words that kids her age do not understand such as conflagration and asinine and indignant. She has chocolate brown hair that falls down just past her shoulders and she usually wears it in a plat witch means she's having a good day but if it's out all by its self it means she's having an extraordinary day and if it's in two plats it means she's having a dreadful day, of course there are more hair days but I think I'll just bore you if I go on.
She also has three or four freckles lightly painted on her face that stand out great in the sun. Now, this little girl has an extraordinary name so don't Laugh, her name is Burgundy but her family and friends like to call her Burger for short. Burgundy is part of the Ace family where she lives in a house with her mother, her step father, her two brothers and two sisters.
The Mother of the Ace family is named after her grandmother, Camel Rosemary Hamilton, Rosemary also known as Rose.
With her long straight brown hair that goes down just above the waist and her smell that always smells like peppermint, she is a very nice and caring person. She's interested in artifacts all over the world, studying them and getting her hands dirty as she gets them out of the ground, which makes her a paleontologist. She is a very strong and independent woman and takes great care of her children.
The stepfather of the family is called Peter Flinch also known as Pett. He has a shaggy blond beard that goes up to his chest, so shaggy that you can't really see his face, and his a little over wait as his fat stomach struggles under his belt buckle. His choice of career is simple he works at a school, not the school that the children go to, another one, one that he thinks has better pay, but of course he is wrong.
Now we move onto the two brothers, we'll start with the youngest Benjamin also known as Ben; his age is 1 years old, so still only a baby. He doesn't have a career and if he did he'd probable make it into the book of world records to be the youngest child to get a job. There's not much to say about Ben, he has got tiny blonde hair on the top of his head that looks exactly like the sun when it's shining it's brightest. He can walk, he can talk but only a little bit, you have to learn to understand baby language when you have no choice but to grow up with them.
The next boy in the family is 14 years old and his name is Jackson, Jack for short, and he can do remarkable jumps on his skateboard. He has scruffy brown hair just like his Mother and freckles still light on his face like his sister, Burger. He was the boy who liked to wear black, like the Goth type but not completely black he didn't wear black all the time, his mother forbid it. Also he didn't have a job, yet, he had to wait one more year and then he could go work at a supermarket or something.
The next one on the list is the second youngest sister out of the three sisters and her name is Cecelia but people call her Ceil. Ceil belongs to Mr Flinch so she isn't really related to the others, only Ben because Mrs Ace and Mr Flinch had a baby together when they got married. So that means that Ceil has blonde hair that goes down to her shoulders and it's nice and curly. She's only 15 years old, so just above Jack and she has a job, she works down at Pizza Hut and she loves working near all of that yum pizza.
I know what you're thinking; people with short blonde hair are usually tomb boys and stupid, but not this girl, this girl is the biggest shopper ever to live the earth and as for smart, she's a geek that's hot and popular how better could it get.
And last but not least we have the oldest out of all of them and pretty much the star of the story...
Stephanie Ace, also known as Steph. A tall brown, curled hair, 16 year old girl who takes after her father, Erick, with the curly hair and the eyes that are just the perfect shade of green. She's a tomb boy mixed in with a girly girl, so she's pretty much mix and match. She doesn't like the idea of her Mother and Father splitting up and she defiantly doesn't like the idea of her Mother marring an idiot fatso that doesn't know which ways up and which ways down. She misses her father, she didn't know him for very long, he left when she was 10 and when Jack was 8 and Burger was 3.
She never thought she would be able to forgive him for that but now all she wants to do is hear his voice again and she'd give up anything to hear the sweet sound of his laugh one more time.
"DIG IN!" Mrs Ace yelled to all of her children who were sitting around the table quietly, waiting for their breakfast to be placed in front of them. Offcourse they all obeyed, judging by their hunger and by the way Mrs Ace said 'dig in' it'll almost be an insult if they didn't do so.
Jack started on Mrs Ace's delicious pancakes first, she makes the best pancakes that every lived the earth with the beautiful golden syrup squirted all over the rich pancakes made from the pancakes mix and the vanilla ice-cream placed on top with bananas cut and placed carefully around it and with the tasteful honey swiftly surrounded on top. None of the children could believe to explain how delicious it was when it entered your mouth, sat there for a brief second while you chewed on it before swallowing it as it ran down your throat and then entered your stomach.
Most of the children would beg for seconds when there done but lately there haven't been seconds to give as Mrs Ace couldn't be bothered with making a fresh batch. While everyone enjoined their pancakes in silent Burgundy leaned over to Steph in conversation.
"Can you take me to the lake after breakfast?" She asked, no louder then a whisper. Steph shrugged, confused by her sister asking this as Mrs Ace usually takes her to the lake every Saturday after breakfast and they go and enjoy a nice quiet swim in the cold water, so why was Burger asking her.
"Why not mum?" Steph finely asked, after much thinking. Burger's face suddenly turned serious as it usually is a joking, funny look, a serious look on Burger is very disturbing.
"Well..." She began to say but then stopped dead when Mrs Ace looked over at the two girls and smiled. Burger waved back with a guilty look on her face, she always did crack under pressure. As soon as Mrs Ace turned away to talk to Peter, Burger became more relaxed.
She looked back at Steph and continued her story. "Well, last Saturday when mum and I went to the lake something happened that I'm not proud of." She stopped to look at Mrs Ace again as if she was scared that if she was court telling this story she would have to go to jail or something but when she saw that the cost was clear she continued. "After I had a good swim I decided it was time to hop out, course, you know, it was getting cold and that's when it happened." She stopped again and that's when Steph started to get annoyed.
"What happened" She said as loud as she could without the others hearing. Burger took a deep breath and looked at Steph straight in the eyes.
"I tripped, right, on a rock, so I like, screamed as loud as my voice could allow. Then suddenly this elderly man came out and started shouting for us to get off his propriety, right" Steph was nodding to this as it was told. "So he thinks that the lake that's opened to everyone belongs to him, that it's his property. So when mum defended her case and simply explained that the lake was for everyone to the old man, he got angrier and decided it was time to get the police involved.
So the police eventually got there, right, and heard both sides of the argument and then the police came to a conclusion that the man is simply mad and mum's right, the lake is opened to everyone in the area. So the police left and the man got so angry he lashed out at me." Burger then pulled her cute little scarf that was around her neck down a little for Steph to see a long red mark across her neck. Steph gasped at the graze and then quickly slapped her hand over her mouth. Everyone looked at her, confused at what happened.
"Everything alright dear?" Mrs Ace asked politely. She gave a glance at Burger, who had already covered her neck up again with her scarf and was looking at Steph like the others were, confused. Maybe she could act, Steph thought to herself as 14 worried eyes stared at her. She didn't know what to do, like her sister she cracks under pressure and she had to think up something fast. She looked left at the wall, nothing there she could use, then she looked right where a big, beautiful picture stood out on the wall, she could use that, expect it's been there practically her whole life, so maybe not. Then she looked at her plate, it would have to do.
"I was just thinking how good these pancakes are, yeah, that last bite really got to me." Lame, she thought as her family did not stop looking at her. But then Mrs Ace smiled, pleased with herself and then everyone went back to normal. Steph gave a huge sigh and then looked at her little sister. "Thanks for the help" she groaned at her but then Burger raised her hands.
"Hey, you were the one that gasped loud enough to get their attention" She defended herself before taking another deep breath. "Yeah but..." Steph shook her head, not caring anymore, she didn't want to argue, she wanted to find out why that man lashed out at her little sister.
Burger took her look as a winning streak and continued with her story.
I hope you liked the story, I was bored and just decided to write this. Tell me if you want me to write more please and LEAVE COMMENTS!
Also she speaks like an adult and uses words that kids her age do not understand such as conflagration and asinine and indignant. She has chocolate brown hair that falls down just past her shoulders and she usually wears it in a plat witch means she's having a good day but if it's out all by its self it means she's having an extraordinary day and if it's in two plats it means she's having a dreadful day, of course there are more hair days but I think I'll just bore you if I go on.
She also has three or four freckles lightly painted on her face that stand out great in the sun. Now, this little girl has an extraordinary name so don't Laugh, her name is Burgundy but her family and friends like to call her Burger for short. Burgundy is part of the Ace family where she lives in a house with her mother, her step father, her two brothers and two sisters.
The Mother of the Ace family is named after her grandmother, Camel Rosemary Hamilton, Rosemary also known as Rose.
With her long straight brown hair that goes down just above the waist and her smell that always smells like peppermint, she is a very nice and caring person. She's interested in artifacts all over the world, studying them and getting her hands dirty as she gets them out of the ground, which makes her a paleontologist. She is a very strong and independent woman and takes great care of her children.
The stepfather of the family is called Peter Flinch also known as Pett. He has a shaggy blond beard that goes up to his chest, so shaggy that you can't really see his face, and his a little over wait as his fat stomach struggles under his belt buckle. His choice of career is simple he works at a school, not the school that the children go to, another one, one that he thinks has better pay, but of course he is wrong.
Now we move onto the two brothers, we'll start with the youngest Benjamin also known as Ben; his age is 1 years old, so still only a baby. He doesn't have a career and if he did he'd probable make it into the book of world records to be the youngest child to get a job. There's not much to say about Ben, he has got tiny blonde hair on the top of his head that looks exactly like the sun when it's shining it's brightest. He can walk, he can talk but only a little bit, you have to learn to understand baby language when you have no choice but to grow up with them.
The next boy in the family is 14 years old and his name is Jackson, Jack for short, and he can do remarkable jumps on his skateboard. He has scruffy brown hair just like his Mother and freckles still light on his face like his sister, Burger. He was the boy who liked to wear black, like the Goth type but not completely black he didn't wear black all the time, his mother forbid it. Also he didn't have a job, yet, he had to wait one more year and then he could go work at a supermarket or something.
The next one on the list is the second youngest sister out of the three sisters and her name is Cecelia but people call her Ceil. Ceil belongs to Mr Flinch so she isn't really related to the others, only Ben because Mrs Ace and Mr Flinch had a baby together when they got married. So that means that Ceil has blonde hair that goes down to her shoulders and it's nice and curly. She's only 15 years old, so just above Jack and she has a job, she works down at Pizza Hut and she loves working near all of that yum pizza.
I know what you're thinking; people with short blonde hair are usually tomb boys and stupid, but not this girl, this girl is the biggest shopper ever to live the earth and as for smart, she's a geek that's hot and popular how better could it get.
And last but not least we have the oldest out of all of them and pretty much the star of the story...
Stephanie Ace, also known as Steph. A tall brown, curled hair, 16 year old girl who takes after her father, Erick, with the curly hair and the eyes that are just the perfect shade of green. She's a tomb boy mixed in with a girly girl, so she's pretty much mix and match. She doesn't like the idea of her Mother and Father splitting up and she defiantly doesn't like the idea of her Mother marring an idiot fatso that doesn't know which ways up and which ways down. She misses her father, she didn't know him for very long, he left when she was 10 and when Jack was 8 and Burger was 3.
She never thought she would be able to forgive him for that but now all she wants to do is hear his voice again and she'd give up anything to hear the sweet sound of his laugh one more time.
"DIG IN!" Mrs Ace yelled to all of her children who were sitting around the table quietly, waiting for their breakfast to be placed in front of them. Offcourse they all obeyed, judging by their hunger and by the way Mrs Ace said 'dig in' it'll almost be an insult if they didn't do so.
Jack started on Mrs Ace's delicious pancakes first, she makes the best pancakes that every lived the earth with the beautiful golden syrup squirted all over the rich pancakes made from the pancakes mix and the vanilla ice-cream placed on top with bananas cut and placed carefully around it and with the tasteful honey swiftly surrounded on top. None of the children could believe to explain how delicious it was when it entered your mouth, sat there for a brief second while you chewed on it before swallowing it as it ran down your throat and then entered your stomach.
Most of the children would beg for seconds when there done but lately there haven't been seconds to give as Mrs Ace couldn't be bothered with making a fresh batch. While everyone enjoined their pancakes in silent Burgundy leaned over to Steph in conversation.
"Can you take me to the lake after breakfast?" She asked, no louder then a whisper. Steph shrugged, confused by her sister asking this as Mrs Ace usually takes her to the lake every Saturday after breakfast and they go and enjoy a nice quiet swim in the cold water, so why was Burger asking her.
"Why not mum?" Steph finely asked, after much thinking. Burger's face suddenly turned serious as it usually is a joking, funny look, a serious look on Burger is very disturbing.
"Well..." She began to say but then stopped dead when Mrs Ace looked over at the two girls and smiled. Burger waved back with a guilty look on her face, she always did crack under pressure. As soon as Mrs Ace turned away to talk to Peter, Burger became more relaxed.
She looked back at Steph and continued her story. "Well, last Saturday when mum and I went to the lake something happened that I'm not proud of." She stopped to look at Mrs Ace again as if she was scared that if she was court telling this story she would have to go to jail or something but when she saw that the cost was clear she continued. "After I had a good swim I decided it was time to hop out, course, you know, it was getting cold and that's when it happened." She stopped again and that's when Steph started to get annoyed.
"What happened" She said as loud as she could without the others hearing. Burger took a deep breath and looked at Steph straight in the eyes.
"I tripped, right, on a rock, so I like, screamed as loud as my voice could allow. Then suddenly this elderly man came out and started shouting for us to get off his propriety, right" Steph was nodding to this as it was told. "So he thinks that the lake that's opened to everyone belongs to him, that it's his property. So when mum defended her case and simply explained that the lake was for everyone to the old man, he got angrier and decided it was time to get the police involved.
So the police eventually got there, right, and heard both sides of the argument and then the police came to a conclusion that the man is simply mad and mum's right, the lake is opened to everyone in the area. So the police left and the man got so angry he lashed out at me." Burger then pulled her cute little scarf that was around her neck down a little for Steph to see a long red mark across her neck. Steph gasped at the graze and then quickly slapped her hand over her mouth. Everyone looked at her, confused at what happened.
"Everything alright dear?" Mrs Ace asked politely. She gave a glance at Burger, who had already covered her neck up again with her scarf and was looking at Steph like the others were, confused. Maybe she could act, Steph thought to herself as 14 worried eyes stared at her. She didn't know what to do, like her sister she cracks under pressure and she had to think up something fast. She looked left at the wall, nothing there she could use, then she looked right where a big, beautiful picture stood out on the wall, she could use that, expect it's been there practically her whole life, so maybe not. Then she looked at her plate, it would have to do.
"I was just thinking how good these pancakes are, yeah, that last bite really got to me." Lame, she thought as her family did not stop looking at her. But then Mrs Ace smiled, pleased with herself and then everyone went back to normal. Steph gave a huge sigh and then looked at her little sister. "Thanks for the help" she groaned at her but then Burger raised her hands.
"Hey, you were the one that gasped loud enough to get their attention" She defended herself before taking another deep breath. "Yeah but..." Steph shook her head, not caring anymore, she didn't want to argue, she wanted to find out why that man lashed out at her little sister.
Burger took her look as a winning streak and continued with her story.
I hope you liked the story, I was bored and just decided to write this. Tell me if you want me to write more please and LEAVE COMMENTS!
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