Secrets Aren't Meant To Be Broken

About how a group of close buds reveal a secret and fall in deep danger... (pic of Jason)
We all have deep secrets buried within us. People say that secrets aren't meant to be broken but it is all for nothing. Knowing this fact too, we sometimes unknowingly break our promises made between us and the people we trust. I, being the author of this story, have broken many promises. But it's just the psychology of humans.
This story is just about the group of friends who break a promise not knowing that it can be deadly.......

In a town named Bolivia there was a community of people who lived collectively. There was a group of kids that all the time stayed together. They were 6 of them. Camryn was 9, Stella was 8, Jason was Stella's older brother who was 13, Sarah was 6, Alester was 11, Jennifer was 10. All were from different families but when in concert, made a petite kin of their own.

Once while Camryn and Stella were playing an elderly female from no-where came towards them, shuddered and fell down. They both came towards the lady. She whispered to them, "please, listen to what I say. I will tell u a secret not to be revealed, do not tell this secret to anyone, not even your dearest ones, keep it to yourselves. The secret is ....."

She said the secret to the girls and suddenly two folks came by and took the lady away saying that the lady was just a psycho being taken to the rest home. That day the girls said this to their other buds. They revealed the secret to others. They did not know about the danger that was about to come.
( you guys may be wondering what the secret is...but as it is a secret I won't tell you guys till it is the right time...)

5 years went by but nothing happened. Then the day came. It was 1st of September. Camryn had the strangest dream ever. She saw herself in a real dark place. All alone, gasping for air. A lady wearing a dark sari with a bizarre mark on her face, more like an ancient pictogram.

She stood there, quiet for moments. It felt like years had passed. Then finally the lady spoke. "my name is Vedina. I am here to warn you." Camryn said, "warn me? about what?" "do you know what you have done? You have done a terrible mistake. Remember that lady who came down to you some years back. She told you the secret, didn't she? She said you the secret is ...."she shouted at Camryn. "how do you know that?" asked Camryn. "I know everything. She wasn't just any woman. She was a dark force. Her name is Vrayokle. She loves to kill kids. She tells them the secret and if those children tell it to anyone....she kills them."

'Kill' was the work which was rolling in Camryn's mind. Vedina then suddenly took out a knife and cut a small line on Camryn's hand. Blood prickled down Camryn's hands. "What was this for?" she asked. The lady said, "For you to remember me." She said.

Camryn closed her eyes and when she again opened them, she was in her room, on her cozy bed. She thought it was a dream but not anymore when she saw that cut on her hand.
Should I continue?
Definitely!!
Yes
Maybe
No
Never ever!!
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Published: 2/10/2011
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