Secret Moments - Sneak Peek

It's a sneak peek of what I'm working on... I want to know if you like it so do the poll and comment.
This sneak peek of my story 'Secret moments' is not in order. It will add a few surprises throughout the story.

Tala, her parents left her, she's got money, too much of it. By surprise she's got a new person in her life, Jace. Tala has to go to a new school, make new friends, but she has a new roommate, which she finds out she can relate to in more ways than one. She's not normal and neither is Jace. They go to school still while they're figuring out their lives, in a new town, everyone stares, not used to having new people; it's a change for everyone. They find that Jace is losing control, and it's up to Tala to save him.

Jace and Tala are test tube babies; they don't know that until they have a run-in with the people who have created them. They have special powers, there are 6 of these special people, there are 3 girls and three guys, all of them 17, except for Tala, and she came late. There are two different traits boys who get the elements; Earth, Fire, Air, Water and Spirit, the girls can control things with their minds.

Tala was given to a family because she didn't show the signs the other 5 did. The 5 started questioning what happened to her when they all started getting feelings for each other, except Jace didn't have anyone. They got their minds wiped of all the memories that they had of Tala. Something went wrong with Jace and he lost nearly everything he knew. Each of the girls have a brother. They are normally twins except for Tala and her brother. Jace runs away because he needs to find the one he loves.
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Published: 12/14/2011
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