Scary Situations - #1

Something short I wrote for my friend.... comment if you like it :)
My fingers typed swiftly on the keys on my laptop, as a door slammed somewhere in the house. I froze and my fingers still on the keyboard. I was home alone...or I was supposed to be. My heartbeat raced in my chest, and the hair on the back of my neck stood up. I could feel the change in the air, and I knew something was in the house. I slid off the bed I was lying on and grabbed the bat that rested next to my dresser. Another slam of a door let me know which direction I was headed in. The bathroom. My fingers tightened around the bat as I paused at the bathroom door. The light was on but no noise came from inside. The door was being opened again, and my heartbeat skipped a beat. I slammed the door open and began to violently beat the person. I heard a crack and a loud thud. My beating stopped immediately as the person slumped, unconscious to the ground. I looked down at their black clothing, and covered face. A mask covered everything important on there face except their eyes, nose, and mouth. I pulled the mask off only to find a familiar man's face.

Questions he wanted me to ask you about the following passage:

1) What would you do if you were in the person's place?
2) What do you think the man was doing in her house?
3) Could the person have handled the situation better? If yes, how? If no, why?
4) Do you think the main character is a man or a woman. Explain.
5) :D Do you think these questions are dumb? (I do!)

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Published: 10/1/2010
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