A Sad Story

It’s a sad poem…had a little bit of work that needs to be done about it but I would like to know what you all think about it.
You can’t feel me
And I’m not showing
But I’m here depending on you
You’re full of emotions
Not knowing what you should do next
You can’t feel me
And I’m not showing
But you know I’m here
Growing bigger each day
Your emotions are overpowering
Thinking you have only one option
You read the brochure and you think it’s the right thing to do
You can’t feel me
And I’m not showing
But you know I’m here
Today you don’t know how to deal with you emotions
For today is the day that ill leave you forever
The man made medicines that you took
Expelling me as if I were a virus
You can’t feel me
And I’m not showing
And you know I’m gone
Emotions run deep wondering what could have been
And what just simply can’t be done

By Samantha Ortiz
Published: 2/21/2007 		Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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