Royals Love - Chapter 4 (Rewrite)
Rewrite! And COMMENT !
This is gonna be a rewrite as the original wasn't so good. And in this chapter, I'll be posting a POV of a boy which will come out in the later chapters...
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Tyler's POV:
Crystal was about to be hit by that damn car! Can't that idiotic driver see Crystal in front of her? "Crystal Hime-sama!" I heard a familiar voice. A quick movement pulled Crystal out of the way before the pink car hit her. The girl droved out like nothing had happened. But I focused my attention to the guy who saved Crystal. John. Josh's cousin. "John!" I shouted at him. "What took you so long?!" I couldn't really help myself, John is normally always early.
"Sorry. Some things came up" he said sheepishly and I forgave him cause he saved Crys. "But if this happens again, you're switching roles" I said. "Tyler-sama! You're not thinking of making him a butler are you?!" Josh said and I had to laugh at that. "Of course not, Josh. Chill. Oh yea, John, is Crys okay?" Crystal's body just lay in John's arms, motionless. "She should be fine. But what happened?" he said. "Wait a second here! Who the hell are you?!" Derek's brother, Vincent shouted at John. "Vincent-sama. This is my cousin, John" Josh said.
Vincent's POV:
"Vincent-sama. This is my cousin, John" Josh said and I was totally confused! The title '-Sama' is used to address people of high authority. And Josh's family serves the royal families so why does his cousin serve a commoner like Crystal and the punk, Tyler? "Well, we should take Crys to the infirmary right?" Derek said. And silently I agreed.
**Next Day**
Rei's POV:
"Rei! Stop daydreaming, will ya?" my best friend, Jake said. And I poked my tongue at him, he laughed. "Can't stop thinking about the girl you met on your destined day?" Jake teased and everyone laughed. He wasn't wrong because it was true. I was thinking about the girl that moved me.
"Oh. Look who's here. What do you want?" the leader of the Royale gang said to me. I had been waiting for my girlfriend that day, outside her school. "Hey Ronica, look who's here" he said and me "girlfriend" looked over his shoulder, looked at me and looked away. That bitch! I should have known. She was just after my parent's company. Since I'm the successor, my wife will get an equal portion of money. "Hey. Can't you guys just stop this already?" a cute girl said. Another girl and a boy were behind her. "Oh yea? What's a little girl like you gonna do about it?" the gang leader said and I swear, I could actually hear the girl mentally snapping. Since then, I called her "Snap" cause I didn't know her name. The guys looked scared then and when "snap" looked at them, her eyes were red. Red with fury! "Don't you call me a little girl!" she said and then a fight broke out. The results were shocking. it was a girl against 5 guys and the girl won. The guys didn't even punch her once. Incredible!
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Okay this rewrite is short cause I dun have much time. Please comment!
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Tyler's POV:
Crystal was about to be hit by that damn car! Can't that idiotic driver see Crystal in front of her? "Crystal Hime-sama!" I heard a familiar voice. A quick movement pulled Crystal out of the way before the pink car hit her. The girl droved out like nothing had happened. But I focused my attention to the guy who saved Crystal. John. Josh's cousin. "John!" I shouted at him. "What took you so long?!" I couldn't really help myself, John is normally always early.
"Sorry. Some things came up" he said sheepishly and I forgave him cause he saved Crys. "But if this happens again, you're switching roles" I said. "Tyler-sama! You're not thinking of making him a butler are you?!" Josh said and I had to laugh at that. "Of course not, Josh. Chill. Oh yea, John, is Crys okay?" Crystal's body just lay in John's arms, motionless. "She should be fine. But what happened?" he said. "Wait a second here! Who the hell are you?!" Derek's brother, Vincent shouted at John. "Vincent-sama. This is my cousin, John" Josh said.
Vincent's POV:
"Vincent-sama. This is my cousin, John" Josh said and I was totally confused! The title '-Sama' is used to address people of high authority. And Josh's family serves the royal families so why does his cousin serve a commoner like Crystal and the punk, Tyler? "Well, we should take Crys to the infirmary right?" Derek said. And silently I agreed.
**Next Day**
Rei's POV:
"Rei! Stop daydreaming, will ya?" my best friend, Jake said. And I poked my tongue at him, he laughed. "Can't stop thinking about the girl you met on your destined day?" Jake teased and everyone laughed. He wasn't wrong because it was true. I was thinking about the girl that moved me.
"Oh. Look who's here. What do you want?" the leader of the Royale gang said to me. I had been waiting for my girlfriend that day, outside her school. "Hey Ronica, look who's here" he said and me "girlfriend" looked over his shoulder, looked at me and looked away. That bitch! I should have known. She was just after my parent's company. Since I'm the successor, my wife will get an equal portion of money. "Hey. Can't you guys just stop this already?" a cute girl said. Another girl and a boy were behind her. "Oh yea? What's a little girl like you gonna do about it?" the gang leader said and I swear, I could actually hear the girl mentally snapping. Since then, I called her "Snap" cause I didn't know her name. The guys looked scared then and when "snap" looked at them, her eyes were red. Red with fury! "Don't you call me a little girl!" she said and then a fight broke out. The results were shocking. it was a girl against 5 guys and the girl won. The guys didn't even punch her once. Incredible!
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Okay this rewrite is short cause I dun have much time. Please comment!
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