Rotten Bones

It's Sammi again, but this time for horror. My father is a horror writer so I hope I picked up some of his talent in this department. Post a comment and tell me what you think, please. =)
I was sitting on the moist wooden bench, waiting. I knew he was coming, but I would not run away from this forever. Then I heard it, the slow drag of moist skin against the dampened grass of the late April showers. I frightfully dug my nails into my legs to keep myself from running. I didn't look up, but I could already smell the stench of my undead love. Kurt had passed away of an illness about a month ago, I witnessed his burial, although I did not witness him slowly digging his way out of the ground and sloppily coming for me. How did I know he was coming for me? Kurt had been like that, he loved me and I loved him, we were of the same. But now he is dead, so he has come for me, he had never wanted to be alone in anything and I knew I'd be his choice of prey tonight. I readied myself, hood up, as I felt his arms go around my neck, a soft grumble escaping his lips. With his unearthly strength, he carried me away as I held my breath to save me from the stench, and gave myself away to my now undead lover.
What did you think?
Nasty!
Nice Work
That's just terrible
Stop, just stop
Loved it
It's okay
Keep Going =)
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Published: 4/22/2011
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