Red-head Chapter 1
Ruby is just an ordinary teenage girl. She's pretty short and has ruby red hair, which attracts many unpleasant and unwanted attention. Take an insight into her life which is filled with all sorts of stuff.
Kelzz: Awww-Thankz! Yes...I just posted now, so enjoy!
Emily Morgan: Actually thanks, because of you I decided to edit it...hope this is good enough for ya. And just because my character is a red-head & short just like you, that doesn't mean you & Ruby are going to have the same personality or same feelings. Not every short red-head's the same.
Gabby: I'm trying to build up the story slowly, instead of rushing. & to be honest, I didn't actually plan the whole story, I'm going to make it up as I go along-hope you don't mind, but if you do-you don't have to keep reading this story :P
Audrey Mt: & ThankYouu Audrey Mt for the suggestion of how I could improve my story. Obviously, a story isn't complete without a bit of romance and excitement. So Dw..I already planned a bit of that ;) Lool.
**What?? ONLY 4 comments?!?! :O I'm utterly confused and upset, coz I don't know how many people actually read the story properly, or how many just read a few line and got bored...People-I need COMMENTS to know what your thinking. I'm not a psychic you know.
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So here I am, in a new big school. It looks thousand times bigger than me, as i stare at it from a road away. Well, I am short anyway, so probably that's why it looks like a giant. I wonder how people will react to my height and my eccentric red hair, and not forgetting the fact that my name is Ruby! Red hair-Ruby? Get it?...Couldn't my parents put a little more thought in to choosing my name! So LAZY. I start walking up to the office, taking small steps as possible, I mean who wants to start a new school, in the middle of a term? I HATE ATTENTION-Unless it's good attention obviously.
So as I unfortunately come to a stop in front of the office door's, I get a bit embarrassed because I have no idea what to do to open the doors. SHIT. Luckily, the door's start opening while it says "The door has been released", and a lady smiles at me from the desk, through the glass-walls. Pheeew!
So I start walking up to the counter, and nervously say "Hi, I'm a new student."
"Oh hello, welcome to EastHigh School. You must be..Ruby Gail." She says as she checks my name from a note.
"Yes."
"I'll just call on the Head of Year 9 to come and pick you up and drop you off to...assembly in the Hall." As she says that, she picks up the phone and says 'Hello, Mrs Feather? The new student has arrived, could you come and pick her up? Yes, okay, bye.'
"Take a sit, she's coming." The office lady says, while I'm terrified to death, because now EVERYONE-my WHOLE SCHOOL YEAR is going to see me, while I walk into assembly! Oh.My.Gosh!! This is going to be sooo SCARY!
As I'm sitting down anxiously, a tall lady wearing a black suit walks in. I guessed she's my Head Of Year as she starts walking towards me. She looks kind of really strict, because of the way she walks, as if though she's walking in a catwalk, so flawless and confident. And I guess her pretty face adds to the flawless-ness. She looks about 28 years old, but I'm guessing her real age is probably about 32?
"Hello Ruby Gail. Nice to meet you, I'm your Head of Year. Lets walk this way shall we." She gestures. So I start following her, feeling nervous.
We walk for a minute, taking certain turns, until we finally arrive to a hallway where the Assembly Hall is. A section separated with a glass-wall. From the glass wall I can already see some people staring at me, then pointing at me while nudging their friends for attention. More and more people start staring at me and whispering about me, while we walk in. I could feel my face becoming a bit red because of all the attention, but tried to make myself think of something else besides the fact, I'm standing in an Assembly with the whole of my year group staring at me.
And the head teacher finds this a really acceptable moment to start chit-chatting with other teachers. I mean seriously-there's a new student here, if you haven't forgotten! While I'm standing awkwardly, with nowhere to escape from this situation, I hear some of the girls around me commenting on how cute I was. And some of the boy's saying stuff like, 'Dude, we've got a red head-midget in our year!'. I felt like strangling that boy, how dare he call me a midget, I know I am one, but it's kind of stupid to point out something obvious-isn't it?
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Just after a while, when I thought I was going to die because of all the mixed stares, Mrs Feather points me towards the back of the assembly-hall, where my form is I guess.
We walk in utter silence, until we're finally standing in the side of a row of chairs, and with my entire class staring at me. I suppose starting in the middle of the school year does raise a lot of questions. But to be honest, I didn't change schools because I got kicked out or anything like that, it's just that we moved houses so I had to change schools. If I had a say in it, for definite I would NOT be changing to a school with a bunch people I don't know.
"Ok students, stop making the new girl feel uncomfortable, and Mr McKenn this is Ruby Gail." she says as she settles my form down, while introducing me to my form teacher.
"Hello Ruby, I'm your Form Teacher, Mr McKenn." He says with a nice smile. I suppose he seems like an alright teacher.
"Hi." I squeak back, annoyed by how quiet and squeaky my voice sounded.
"Sir, why is there a redhead attacking our school? do you need our help to handle her, or are you brave enough to do it yourself." Some other boy said, while the rest of the boys in my so-called class roared with laughter. He fancies himself as the joker does he?
"Pfftt. Heard it all. Are you that dumb that you can't use your little brain to come up with something new?" I replied.
"So our new girl isn't the shy type, will love to see you get rough with me." He winked.
"That's enough thank you Kyle, amd please I don't want to hear any vulgar jokes from my students." Mr McKenn said to him. "So, who would like to be Ruby's partner for the week-and show her around?" Surprisingly, a lot of people volunteered, almost all the girls (apart from one), & about five of the boys, including Kyle, I totally DON'T want sir to pick him to be partnered up with.
"Ruby, who would you like to be partnered up with?" Mr McKenn asked.
"Err-I don't know." I replied back honestly. Seriously I haven't got a clue, coz I don't know these people yet.
"Okay then, I'll pick Reema for the girl and Jason for the boy." Sir announced. I'm happy as long as I don't have Kyle as my partner for the whole week! And anyway by the look of these two people, they seem alright I suppose.
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"Sir he pushed ME when I was going over to my seat in English, to sit next to Jason!" I explained.
"But sir-SHE pulled my awesome hair that took a lot of time styling in the morning!" He complained. I didn't think boys actually spend time doing their hair in the morning, he's such a girl!
"BUT-I only did that after HE pushed ME first!" I Argued back.
"BUT BUT-She was trying to act all cool and cute and get everyone to like her, which should be a crime coz she's short and definitely NOT cute!" He states a stupid reason.
"EXCUSE ME?!?! Who do you think YOU ARE? I was NOT trying to act all cute and cool, coz I AM cute and cool...Unlike you mister!" I snap back.
"Actually your right. I'm not cute-ask any girl, I'm SEXY! Obviously you don't know the meaning of cool, coz I am IT." He says egoistically.
"Both of you-SHUT UP!" Mr McKenn says. In an instant me & Kyle shut up & look at him-annoyed.
"Are you even allowed to tell us to be quiet in such a rude manner?" I ask him, putting a lot of emphasize on 'allowed', and being quite proud of how formal I sound.
"Yes, especially when you to are acting like 4 year olds! Kyle-stop annoying this girl and leave her alone. And Ruby-Please try to ignore this idiot." Mr McKenn told us off.
"Fine, whatever." Kyle replies.
"Ok, as long as this girl standing beside me doesn't bother me at all." I say with a smirk, knowing that Kyle will totally flip at this.
"WTH-A GIRL?? Sir, she's the one not leaving ME alone. And anyway why the heck did you call me a girl?!?!" He shouted back pissed.
"Coz, you style your hair in the morning LOL, which boy does that? Gay Boy-your out of the bag! And no need to thank me darling-it's my pleasure to let everyone know about this big discovery." I say, folding my arms with a gorgeous smirk on my face.
"You little girl-I'm going to-"He gets interrupted by Mr McKenn.
"Okay ENOUGH!! You two are such a head-ache. Another peep, and you two are going to be on referral, and have a week of detention together-with me, so both of you can learn how to be nice to each other." He warns.
"As I was saying-before I got rudely interrupted: You little girl-I'm going to make you wish you were NEVER born!!" Kyle says in the most inappropriate time, bagging both of us DETENTION. Worse part-with HIM! Some hot guy, please come and save me from this hell.
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Hope you liked it-I think I did a good job at improving my first chapter, and making it longer! COMMENT-How am I supposed to know what your thinking??!!
And I'll try posting next Saturday-2nd of July.
Emily Morgan: Actually thanks, because of you I decided to edit it...hope this is good enough for ya. And just because my character is a red-head & short just like you, that doesn't mean you & Ruby are going to have the same personality or same feelings. Not every short red-head's the same.
Gabby: I'm trying to build up the story slowly, instead of rushing. & to be honest, I didn't actually plan the whole story, I'm going to make it up as I go along-hope you don't mind, but if you do-you don't have to keep reading this story :P
Audrey Mt: & ThankYouu Audrey Mt for the suggestion of how I could improve my story. Obviously, a story isn't complete without a bit of romance and excitement. So Dw..I already planned a bit of that ;) Lool.
**What?? ONLY 4 comments?!?! :O I'm utterly confused and upset, coz I don't know how many people actually read the story properly, or how many just read a few line and got bored...People-I need COMMENTS to know what your thinking. I'm not a psychic you know.
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So here I am, in a new big school. It looks thousand times bigger than me, as i stare at it from a road away. Well, I am short anyway, so probably that's why it looks like a giant. I wonder how people will react to my height and my eccentric red hair, and not forgetting the fact that my name is Ruby! Red hair-Ruby? Get it?...Couldn't my parents put a little more thought in to choosing my name! So LAZY. I start walking up to the office, taking small steps as possible, I mean who wants to start a new school, in the middle of a term? I HATE ATTENTION-Unless it's good attention obviously.
So as I unfortunately come to a stop in front of the office door's, I get a bit embarrassed because I have no idea what to do to open the doors. SHIT. Luckily, the door's start opening while it says "The door has been released", and a lady smiles at me from the desk, through the glass-walls. Pheeew!
So I start walking up to the counter, and nervously say "Hi, I'm a new student."
"Oh hello, welcome to EastHigh School. You must be..Ruby Gail." She says as she checks my name from a note.
"Yes."
"I'll just call on the Head of Year 9 to come and pick you up and drop you off to...assembly in the Hall." As she says that, she picks up the phone and says 'Hello, Mrs Feather? The new student has arrived, could you come and pick her up? Yes, okay, bye.'
"Take a sit, she's coming." The office lady says, while I'm terrified to death, because now EVERYONE-my WHOLE SCHOOL YEAR is going to see me, while I walk into assembly! Oh.My.Gosh!! This is going to be sooo SCARY!
As I'm sitting down anxiously, a tall lady wearing a black suit walks in. I guessed she's my Head Of Year as she starts walking towards me. She looks kind of really strict, because of the way she walks, as if though she's walking in a catwalk, so flawless and confident. And I guess her pretty face adds to the flawless-ness. She looks about 28 years old, but I'm guessing her real age is probably about 32?
"Hello Ruby Gail. Nice to meet you, I'm your Head of Year. Lets walk this way shall we." She gestures. So I start following her, feeling nervous.
We walk for a minute, taking certain turns, until we finally arrive to a hallway where the Assembly Hall is. A section separated with a glass-wall. From the glass wall I can already see some people staring at me, then pointing at me while nudging their friends for attention. More and more people start staring at me and whispering about me, while we walk in. I could feel my face becoming a bit red because of all the attention, but tried to make myself think of something else besides the fact, I'm standing in an Assembly with the whole of my year group staring at me.
And the head teacher finds this a really acceptable moment to start chit-chatting with other teachers. I mean seriously-there's a new student here, if you haven't forgotten! While I'm standing awkwardly, with nowhere to escape from this situation, I hear some of the girls around me commenting on how cute I was. And some of the boy's saying stuff like, 'Dude, we've got a red head-midget in our year!'. I felt like strangling that boy, how dare he call me a midget, I know I am one, but it's kind of stupid to point out something obvious-isn't it?
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Just after a while, when I thought I was going to die because of all the mixed stares, Mrs Feather points me towards the back of the assembly-hall, where my form is I guess.
We walk in utter silence, until we're finally standing in the side of a row of chairs, and with my entire class staring at me. I suppose starting in the middle of the school year does raise a lot of questions. But to be honest, I didn't change schools because I got kicked out or anything like that, it's just that we moved houses so I had to change schools. If I had a say in it, for definite I would NOT be changing to a school with a bunch people I don't know.
"Ok students, stop making the new girl feel uncomfortable, and Mr McKenn this is Ruby Gail." she says as she settles my form down, while introducing me to my form teacher.
"Hello Ruby, I'm your Form Teacher, Mr McKenn." He says with a nice smile. I suppose he seems like an alright teacher.
"Hi." I squeak back, annoyed by how quiet and squeaky my voice sounded.
"Sir, why is there a redhead attacking our school? do you need our help to handle her, or are you brave enough to do it yourself." Some other boy said, while the rest of the boys in my so-called class roared with laughter. He fancies himself as the joker does he?
"Pfftt. Heard it all. Are you that dumb that you can't use your little brain to come up with something new?" I replied.
"So our new girl isn't the shy type, will love to see you get rough with me." He winked.
"That's enough thank you Kyle, amd please I don't want to hear any vulgar jokes from my students." Mr McKenn said to him. "So, who would like to be Ruby's partner for the week-and show her around?" Surprisingly, a lot of people volunteered, almost all the girls (apart from one), & about five of the boys, including Kyle, I totally DON'T want sir to pick him to be partnered up with.
"Ruby, who would you like to be partnered up with?" Mr McKenn asked.
"Err-I don't know." I replied back honestly. Seriously I haven't got a clue, coz I don't know these people yet.
"Okay then, I'll pick Reema for the girl and Jason for the boy." Sir announced. I'm happy as long as I don't have Kyle as my partner for the whole week! And anyway by the look of these two people, they seem alright I suppose.
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"Sir he pushed ME when I was going over to my seat in English, to sit next to Jason!" I explained.
"But sir-SHE pulled my awesome hair that took a lot of time styling in the morning!" He complained. I didn't think boys actually spend time doing their hair in the morning, he's such a girl!
"BUT-I only did that after HE pushed ME first!" I Argued back.
"BUT BUT-She was trying to act all cool and cute and get everyone to like her, which should be a crime coz she's short and definitely NOT cute!" He states a stupid reason.
"EXCUSE ME?!?! Who do you think YOU ARE? I was NOT trying to act all cute and cool, coz I AM cute and cool...Unlike you mister!" I snap back.
"Actually your right. I'm not cute-ask any girl, I'm SEXY! Obviously you don't know the meaning of cool, coz I am IT." He says egoistically.
"Both of you-SHUT UP!" Mr McKenn says. In an instant me & Kyle shut up & look at him-annoyed.
"Are you even allowed to tell us to be quiet in such a rude manner?" I ask him, putting a lot of emphasize on 'allowed', and being quite proud of how formal I sound.
"Yes, especially when you to are acting like 4 year olds! Kyle-stop annoying this girl and leave her alone. And Ruby-Please try to ignore this idiot." Mr McKenn told us off.
"Fine, whatever." Kyle replies.
"Ok, as long as this girl standing beside me doesn't bother me at all." I say with a smirk, knowing that Kyle will totally flip at this.
"WTH-A GIRL?? Sir, she's the one not leaving ME alone. And anyway why the heck did you call me a girl?!?!" He shouted back pissed.
"Coz, you style your hair in the morning LOL, which boy does that? Gay Boy-your out of the bag! And no need to thank me darling-it's my pleasure to let everyone know about this big discovery." I say, folding my arms with a gorgeous smirk on my face.
"You little girl-I'm going to-"He gets interrupted by Mr McKenn.
"Okay ENOUGH!! You two are such a head-ache. Another peep, and you two are going to be on referral, and have a week of detention together-with me, so both of you can learn how to be nice to each other." He warns.
"As I was saying-before I got rudely interrupted: You little girl-I'm going to make you wish you were NEVER born!!" Kyle says in the most inappropriate time, bagging both of us DETENTION. Worse part-with HIM! Some hot guy, please come and save me from this hell.
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Hope you liked it-I think I did a good job at improving my first chapter, and making it longer! COMMENT-How am I supposed to know what your thinking??!!
And I'll try posting next Saturday-2nd of July.
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