Raging War ...?

This is a new story that I had just recently finished...and I was thinking about posting it. (Don't worry. This won't interfere with my posting of the other story :D)

Anyway...here is a small glimspe of it...tell me what you think, eh?

Raging War:

A brutal war raged on outside the walls that I was contained in. My straight brown hair was cut to my shoulders and my green eyes held hope. Hope for the future. I continued on my way down the cells until I got to Jacob's cell. Jacob, the best fighter in our small jail-like building. He hardly ever spoke to anyone, including myself, and he didn't ever like company. I stopped at his cell my hands shook with fear as I knocked ever so softly.

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OHHHH....whatcha think?