Pushing Her Down

PLEASE READ & COMMENT! :) Ever get that feeling in the pit of your stomach that's like a fire's been lit. Like you're just gonna lose it...? I have.
Okay so it doesn't really go into this category, but I feel like the people who write in this category understand me better or something like that... ya know? probably not. lol. welp, heeerrreee it is...!

Peace, serenity
Slow and steady
Calmness surrounding
Until a switch is flipped suddenly

Panic, mayhem
Running away from them
Hide away, locking the door
Stumbling, falling
My body hits the floor

She’s screaming, fighting
Gnawing at her chains
I can’t let her out
She only makes pain

Yelling, howling
Banging and scratching
I try to push her down
Why is this happening?

A smoke all around
Clouds of fury tasting sickly sweet
Choking and coughing
Her flames raising
Reaching out to me

Crack!
I hear a chain break

No, no!
It’s too much to take

Louder and louder
"Freedom!", she screams

My breathing shaking
She’s winning me

A twisted smile creeps across her face
As she slowly breaks away from her imprisoned case

I can’t let her out
"Leave me alone!", I yelp
Pushing her down
No one to help

Crack! Crack!

My pulse bangs in my ears
I close my eyes

I hear her let loose a piercing cry

Clenching my fist
Stronger I push her
My final try

Silence…

My body weak as I unlock the door
I fall to my knees
I’ve won once more
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Feel free to comment feedback of all kinds welcome. constructive criticism too. lol.

Btw... how cool is that picture??!?!?! lol. overexcited, much?
Ever felt like that?
No, not really.
I don't know, maybe this one time...
Yeah, I'm pretty sure I have.
Oh my god! Yes!
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Published: 7/26/2010
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