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This is the preview of a story I'm going to write, so comments would be helpful...
‘Daddy? Where are you?’
‘I’m right here Sweetie, right here’
As the lightening lit up the house every now and then, it was still too hard to move. The fear of stepping on glass or falling and landing on sharp wood was too much. It was complete darkness, and then a few seconds light. As Michael tried to find a way to get to his daughter, Summer, all he could hear were soft whimpers and sobs.
Being only 4, Summer didn’t understand what was going on; all she did was what she was told, "if anything happens, go to your safe spot". Her dad had taught her to do all sorts of things, always due to the fact that anything could happen, especially since they would be after them too now. First the mother, then the child, then the money… then the father is discarded, he just isn’t needed anymore.
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A/N; So this is the preview of my first story. I haven’t written it yet, but it just came to me, I have a really good plan for this one, BUT…I want you to have some input. So tell me what you want to happen and I’ll try to fit it in somewhere :) Oh and also, the story is mainly around Summer, she does grow up but not until like maybe chapter 3, I’m not sure yet. It will skip to when she’s older. It may seem as though you don’t understand but I promise you will when I write the chapters.
Also, I don’t have a title for it, any suggestions?
Any help is great :D
oxo
‘I’m right here Sweetie, right here’
As the lightening lit up the house every now and then, it was still too hard to move. The fear of stepping on glass or falling and landing on sharp wood was too much. It was complete darkness, and then a few seconds light. As Michael tried to find a way to get to his daughter, Summer, all he could hear were soft whimpers and sobs.
Being only 4, Summer didn’t understand what was going on; all she did was what she was told, "if anything happens, go to your safe spot". Her dad had taught her to do all sorts of things, always due to the fact that anything could happen, especially since they would be after them too now. First the mother, then the child, then the money… then the father is discarded, he just isn’t needed anymore.
*****************
A/N; So this is the preview of my first story. I haven’t written it yet, but it just came to me, I have a really good plan for this one, BUT…I want you to have some input. So tell me what you want to happen and I’ll try to fit it in somewhere :) Oh and also, the story is mainly around Summer, she does grow up but not until like maybe chapter 3, I’m not sure yet. It will skip to when she’s older. It may seem as though you don’t understand but I promise you will when I write the chapters.
Also, I don’t have a title for it, any suggestions?
Any help is great :D
oxo
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