Pointless Story

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So here’s the story,,
Its being told,,
In a year’s time,,
It'll be getting sold ..

Its about a girl,,
And a boy,,
So much happiness,,
So much joy ..

But there’s also pain,,
And broken hearts,,
It seems they hate,,
To be apart ..

Are they in love,,
Or is it just fun,,
It was decided when,,
He said Marry me hun ..

She froze in fear,,
Didn’t know what to say,,
This was her heart,,
She was giving away ..

She said she couldn’t,,
She was just too young,,
She felt so hopeless,,
Just so dumb ..

That night she died,,
Holding a frame,,
In blood she wrote,,
I'll never be the same ..

She couldn’t live on,,
She really did love him,,
She just didn’t realize,,
Until the lights went dim ..

When she was alone,,
With no-one to hold,,
That’s when she died,,
Frightened [&&] Cold ..

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By Cleo Gerdes
Published: 5/19/2008
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