Poem
No idea what to title it. Comment if you're reading this and tell me if you like it. I'm not desperate, I just like feedback. Thanks! I usually don't rhyme, so please let me know if it flows.
I heard those words I've never heard before
The invisible scar on a young man's heart
The thoughts he never dared to speak
The secret that I wasn't fit to keep
The mark of his journey runs through his veins
The slash so deep once caused him pain
Now leaves him broken to pieces
And when he watches the stars, he loses himself
And I see him in those hours where he thinks aloud
How did I end up here?
Where have I been?
Where am I going?
But the future is not ours to access
And the past is not ours to keep
So I scoop up his heart and set him up right
And pray for that tunnel
And pray for that light
But his heart is still torn
And tucked out of sight
The invisible scar on a young man's heart
The thoughts he never dared to speak
The secret that I wasn't fit to keep
The mark of his journey runs through his veins
The slash so deep once caused him pain
Now leaves him broken to pieces
And when he watches the stars, he loses himself
And I see him in those hours where he thinks aloud
How did I end up here?
Where have I been?
Where am I going?
But the future is not ours to access
And the past is not ours to keep
So I scoop up his heart and set him up right
And pray for that tunnel
And pray for that light
But his heart is still torn
And tucked out of sight
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