Please Read Commenter Estrella (You Commented On Evaligne)

Hi! Thank you for your input! I will be honest! At first I was like this is really hurtful. Then, I realized that you could really help me on this issue so I won't get anymore comments like yours. No offense. I thought I was doing good, actually. Not making excuses but I'm only thirteen and I'm trying my best. But I'd really like it if you would comment and give me some tips on how to improve this issue.

And I think I'm going too fast myself. I try to slow down but it really doesn't work. And I feel like if I don't get to the good parts that not many people will read.

Please Please help me on this! I want you to like y story also and to make it better! THANK YOU ESTRELLA FOR YOUR INPUT!