Phoenix Tears

A poem for a story I'm working on.
She’s crying on the over,
She’s crying in her tower,
She’s crying in chains,
Her wings are gone,
Her spirit broken,
Her heart shatters,
The rage consumes her,
The sorrow pains her,
The love redeems her,
Her wings return,
Her heart is healed,
Her spirit shines,
She dries her eyes,
She is whole,
She is loved
Her mission is done

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Published: 1/15/2010
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