Phoebe Gardens of 'When Sparks Fly...' Needs Help!!!

I need your help my lovely readers!!!
Heylo everyone, I hope you're ok and everything and school and work isn't getting you too down!

I'm wondering if you can help me, I'm in a kinda two way split with what I want to do with the story and I would greatly appreciate it if you would tell me what you would like to happen and why, so any ideas you have please share them (thank you to the people who have!) I need to gage a reaction of how you're thinking so I can go from there. The more ideas I have, the quicker I'll write another chapter. Any ideas or comments are useful! I really do hate not updating you daily, I'm so sorry, but I am super busy that I just can't make the time. I hope the chapters I post make up for it!

I'll respond here to some of your comments as well...

Sam-haha, Tor is based off me a bit I guess, all of my leads are I suppose, but I rarely get what I want, lol and I don't think I'm that pushy! It is sad she is worrying, but she just can't seem to get rid of her niggling thoughts about Abbie. Ahh you're so cute-thanks so much!
Ciriat-I'm so glad! That was me all over philospohizing about love. They're all my thoughts and I strongly believe them. Love is such a fascinating subject and I think Tor is trying to work out everything about what love is.
Andrea-me too. I fret over every detail. My french teacher told me that today in fact! At the time I think Tor thought is was right but now she knows about Caesar's past, she's become a bit more emotionally attached since they have had sex.
Pauline Bal-you'll never look at this number in the same way again! Lol, a 69 is a sex position, hence why Emily and Hayden were laughing :D
Me&xoxoxoI agree, their love is not sparkling atm because of Tor's doubting thoughts are overtaking their relationship.

Amrit-I truly am suprised you are crying-I don't know how I can do that! Ahh, bless you, I'm touched, but seriosuly there are amazing authors out there much better than me, I am simply an amateur who writes for fun because I'm bored!
Ladylea-I know! I want Caesar to say that too! Same, I would too. Tor is me in this situation so that's how I would have reacted. I am a real worrier. Ahh, I'm sorry, his past is very heartbreaking, but I think very common and isn't discussed enough. Ahh, why do I make you cry and I really am not! I want the old Chick and Caesar back too!
Lexy-ahh, I know. I am so fortunate to have such kind commentors! And you're so welcome! Mmm, yes, but it is so hard to move on from the past. And bless you!

Mel-same! I wish they could go back to bantering and kissing and laughing about, but sigh, life is never that simple! I know, that part is horrible. I read that in a book somewhere and cried for the lady(her hubby is in love with his best girl friend and the lady and her hubby are making love but she knows hes not there with her because he won't look her in the eye and is thinking about his best girl friend. SO heartbreaking-amazing book I tell you!)
Samantha Brooke-you're so sweet! Oh I don't know, I seriously think I could easily drop. Have I told you I love your story even more for making a sexy gardener the lead male! Honestly, I am really touched so many people like the story. It's insane! Oh poor thing, I'm doing A-levels this year so intend to have no life so I can go to uni!

Thank you also everyone else who commented! You're all so sweet and make me all giddy when I receive them! I'm glad you like it so much and take the time to comment so I would really appreciate some help to give me an idea of where to go next!

I hope you can offer some ideas!

Much love

By Phoebe Gardens
Published: 9/17/2009
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