Painful Destiny - Part 5: Watched in Darkness
Everything seems to be a normal night, but Volien unaware, that there's some pair of blue eyes watched her from the dark side of the bar... the guy with pair of blue eyes....
Volien's P.O.V
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In his eyes, I can't go wrong. He is the man in my nightmare! I start to walk towards him because I want to know who is he now. Ervix calls me and asks me whether I am going but I ignored him. I keep walking and didn't removed my eyes off from him while he keeps his irritating eyes on me. Every steps I made I can see him clearly. I am almost 7 feet away from him when I bumped into someone...
"I'm sorry!" I said and I looked at the guy that I bumped into and he only nodded his head.
"It's ok!, Better keep your eyes on your way." He said and smile. I smiled him back and he walked away.
I look at the bar where a guy with blue eyes sitting but now he is no longer there... I search for him in every corner of the bar but I can't find him again.
"Damn!, He's gone!" I said angrily to myself. I'm so disappointed to myself, and I regret the time. Suddenly, I bumped at one guy and brooked my eyes at him.
"Olie!" Ervix yelled, and I turn my head irritated at him.
"What!" I said in a sarcastic voice.
"What are you looking for? We need to go up on stage." He said while walking towards me.
"Oh, Nothing. I'm just looking around Ervix..." I said not telling the truth to him.
"Come on, Linor, let's go as rest of the people are waiting for us." He said and grabbed my right wrist with his left hand and led me to go up on stage. I turn my head once again left and right while walking in a hope that I could see the pair of blue eyes of that mystery guy, but still nothing...
Ervix led me in my usual position on the stage... I'm on the right side, because I lead a guitar. In the left side is Linor our Adlib, (guitarist), and right beside of him is Warren (our keybourdist) and in our back is Ruviel (our drummer) and but not the least, the leader of our band my brother Ervix (our vocalist) ...
Most of the audience the come to the program are girls... they come to see my band mates, specially my brother. I can't blame them, Ervix is really a cool, hot and handsome, even my three band mates are all hot. I'm the only girl in the group, that's why these guys super protected me, when they find a boy flirting with me.
Ervix holds the microphone and speaks, "Good evening, everyone!"And he smile so sweet causing all girls make scream for his name, and their eyes seem full of lust for him... I grinned and I slightly shook my head.
"Why he needs to flirt with all girls here first?" I ask myself.
The waiter comes to Ervix and gives him a small piece of paper. Ervix read it silently. He passed that paper to Linor and Linor passed the paper to Warren until Raviel passed it to me.
I read it and it said, "Someone is requested a song for his girl tonight, because the guy wants to know her that he is always be there for her." And it further said "It's their theme song and tonight he is going to propose her."
I smiled and looked at Ervix who looking at me too... he nodded his head at spoke in the mike again to make an announcement...
"Tonight is the special night, with our two special guests and the guy is requested this song that we are now going to play for his girl. Now we are playing the song... I'll be."...
The light went off first and I started to play my guitar with the first intro of the song with the conjunction of keyboard music of Warren before the light will come again....
"The strands in your eyes that color them wonderful
Stop me and steal my breath.
And emeralds from mountains thrust toward the sky
Never revealing their depth.
Tell me that we belong together,
Dress it up with the trappings of love.
I'll be captivated,
I'll hang from your lips,
Instead of the gallows of heartache that hang from above."
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While Ervix started to sing the song, Volien enjoys to play the guitar and temporarily forgets about the mystery guy, with a pair of blue eyes. She is now singing the chorus of the song along with her brother Ervix. And the man who requested the song walked in the middle of the dance floor, holding the girl in his hand that he loves...
Everything seems to be a normal night, but Volien is unaware, that there's someone with a pair of blue eyes watching her from the dark side of the bar. The guy with blue eyes grinned at the sight of Volien who now enjoying the song and her playing of guitar on the stage.
He grabs his cell phone and dialed a number.
"Hello." The voice from the other line said.
"I saw her." The mystery guy with a blue eyes said, while still staring at Volien...
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Comments reply:
Mizu - Thanks for commenting at my part 1... Hope you enjoy this one.:)
Tileah 'Dobby' - Thanks a lot! I really appreciate your comment. I will ask you later for some advice, I truly need it! And yes I'm getting some idea for the others stories... Specially your story I love reading it. You're really great at writing.
Maxine - Thanks! Hope you like this one.
CJ - Thanks for commenting. Here is the next part. Hope you like it and I love the mystery guy with blue eyes too!
Thanks to all the people reading my story. Let me say sorry to my misspelling and grammar. I already told you guys English is not my first language, Actually it's my fourth language... hehe.. and sorry if I can't make a long conversation. If you looked at my profile, you can find out that I'm not a talkative person in real life.
That's why it's hard for me to write a conversation with so many characters. But I truly promise that I will improve myself. Specially in my stories! Love you guys. Thanks again!
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In his eyes, I can't go wrong. He is the man in my nightmare! I start to walk towards him because I want to know who is he now. Ervix calls me and asks me whether I am going but I ignored him. I keep walking and didn't removed my eyes off from him while he keeps his irritating eyes on me. Every steps I made I can see him clearly. I am almost 7 feet away from him when I bumped into someone...
"I'm sorry!" I said and I looked at the guy that I bumped into and he only nodded his head.
"It's ok!, Better keep your eyes on your way." He said and smile. I smiled him back and he walked away.
I look at the bar where a guy with blue eyes sitting but now he is no longer there... I search for him in every corner of the bar but I can't find him again.
"Damn!, He's gone!" I said angrily to myself. I'm so disappointed to myself, and I regret the time. Suddenly, I bumped at one guy and brooked my eyes at him.
"Olie!" Ervix yelled, and I turn my head irritated at him.
"What!" I said in a sarcastic voice.
"What are you looking for? We need to go up on stage." He said while walking towards me.
"Oh, Nothing. I'm just looking around Ervix..." I said not telling the truth to him.
"Come on, Linor, let's go as rest of the people are waiting for us." He said and grabbed my right wrist with his left hand and led me to go up on stage. I turn my head once again left and right while walking in a hope that I could see the pair of blue eyes of that mystery guy, but still nothing...
Ervix led me in my usual position on the stage... I'm on the right side, because I lead a guitar. In the left side is Linor our Adlib, (guitarist), and right beside of him is Warren (our keybourdist) and in our back is Ruviel (our drummer) and but not the least, the leader of our band my brother Ervix (our vocalist) ...
Most of the audience the come to the program are girls... they come to see my band mates, specially my brother. I can't blame them, Ervix is really a cool, hot and handsome, even my three band mates are all hot. I'm the only girl in the group, that's why these guys super protected me, when they find a boy flirting with me.
Ervix holds the microphone and speaks, "Good evening, everyone!"And he smile so sweet causing all girls make scream for his name, and their eyes seem full of lust for him... I grinned and I slightly shook my head.
"Why he needs to flirt with all girls here first?" I ask myself.
The waiter comes to Ervix and gives him a small piece of paper. Ervix read it silently. He passed that paper to Linor and Linor passed the paper to Warren until Raviel passed it to me.
I read it and it said, "Someone is requested a song for his girl tonight, because the guy wants to know her that he is always be there for her." And it further said "It's their theme song and tonight he is going to propose her."
I smiled and looked at Ervix who looking at me too... he nodded his head at spoke in the mike again to make an announcement...
"Tonight is the special night, with our two special guests and the guy is requested this song that we are now going to play for his girl. Now we are playing the song... I'll be."...
The light went off first and I started to play my guitar with the first intro of the song with the conjunction of keyboard music of Warren before the light will come again....
"The strands in your eyes that color them wonderful
Stop me and steal my breath.
And emeralds from mountains thrust toward the sky
Never revealing their depth.
Tell me that we belong together,
Dress it up with the trappings of love.
I'll be captivated,
I'll hang from your lips,
Instead of the gallows of heartache that hang from above."
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While Ervix started to sing the song, Volien enjoys to play the guitar and temporarily forgets about the mystery guy, with a pair of blue eyes. She is now singing the chorus of the song along with her brother Ervix. And the man who requested the song walked in the middle of the dance floor, holding the girl in his hand that he loves...
Everything seems to be a normal night, but Volien is unaware, that there's someone with a pair of blue eyes watching her from the dark side of the bar. The guy with blue eyes grinned at the sight of Volien who now enjoying the song and her playing of guitar on the stage.
He grabs his cell phone and dialed a number.
"Hello." The voice from the other line said.
"I saw her." The mystery guy with a blue eyes said, while still staring at Volien...
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Comments reply:
Mizu - Thanks for commenting at my part 1... Hope you enjoy this one.:)
Tileah 'Dobby' - Thanks a lot! I really appreciate your comment. I will ask you later for some advice, I truly need it! And yes I'm getting some idea for the others stories... Specially your story I love reading it. You're really great at writing.
Maxine - Thanks! Hope you like this one.
CJ - Thanks for commenting. Here is the next part. Hope you like it and I love the mystery guy with blue eyes too!
Thanks to all the people reading my story. Let me say sorry to my misspelling and grammar. I already told you guys English is not my first language, Actually it's my fourth language... hehe.. and sorry if I can't make a long conversation. If you looked at my profile, you can find out that I'm not a talkative person in real life.
That's why it's hard for me to write a conversation with so many characters. But I truly promise that I will improve myself. Specially in my stories! Love you guys. Thanks again!
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- Painful Destiny: Part 8 - The Meaningful Dreams
- Painful Destiny - Part 7: The Beginning of the Revelations
- Painful Destiny - Part 6: The Secret of Brothers and the Amulet
- Painful Destiny - Part 4: A Mystery Guy with Blue Eyes


