Painful Destiny - Part 4: A Mystery Guy with Blue Eyes
I stared at him for so long and I didn't notice that he was also looking at me now.. we don't broke our gaze at each other when I notice his eyes! It's blue! Like the eyes of the man in my nightmare!
*****After 18 years*****
I was standing in the darkness and I can't see anything except pure darkness, I walked slowly turning my head left and right finding someone who can help me to get out of this darkness...
I stopped walking when I saw a figure in front of me... I can't see the figure properly because of the darkness, but suddenly it went clearly in my vision and I saw a man standing back at me..
I thought he's my brother Ervix so I ran towards him,when I got near him I grabbed his left shoulder and turned him to face me.
"Ervix" I said smilingly but when the man turned to face me, I gasped and I removed my hand at his shoulder.. I stepped back away from him while his eyes staring at me.. my human heart beating so fast, when he started to walk slowly towards me.. I step back again every step he made to get near me...
"Who are you?" I asked him but he didn't answer me, I could only see her eyes because his face is almost cover of darkness.. then he raised up his right hand up to his head and the shinning silver sword appeared.
I can't barely move at my feet I was frozen when I saw the shinning sword at his hand. He stepped two more step towards me and I see closely his blue eyes full of sadness and regrets.
"You need to die" he said with a cold voice and my eyes wide open when I saw that he will cut me by his sword..
Ring!!
I forced my eyes to open and quickly sat up... I breathed heavily and my heart beat is like a drum. I touched my forehead and it's full of sweat.. I breath heavily and sighed.. I turned my head at my still ringing alarm clock, 9:30 pm.. I pushed the button to stop it from ringing and I took off my blanket and walked to my closet, I grabbed my jeans and my white tanktop, I put it in my bed before I grabbed my towel and went take a good shower..
I can't believe in my dreams, I always dreamed that man who wanted to kill me, but he had a sadness and regrets in his eyes.. I sighed again and shook my head..
"Nightmare again."
After I took a shower and got dressed, put a little bit of make up and wore my flat white converse, I grabbed my guitar at the corner of my room and walked towards the door and closed it behind me..
I walked at the hallway when someone called me..
"Olie!"
I stopped walking and even I didn't turn my head, I knew who is it..
"Yeah" I turn my head to look at Ervix who always had his perfect smile on his lips.. he is my second eldest brother, he's 6'3, while I'm only 5'6, I looked so short every time my brother is standing beside me.. he's got gray eyes and a long black hair almost falling at his shoulder but it's always in bun. A pale skin and a he's got a pink lip with 1 piercing at his left lower lips... he is my best bud brother, and he is our Vocalist in our vampire band - night creepers- ( haha I can't think much perfect name for their band sowie) while I'm on the lead guitar but a second vocalist too..
"Wanna ride? He asked me.
"Hmm..." I pretend to think first..
"Comon! Don't think so long.."
"Ok!"
He smiled and I also smiled at him. He put his right hand at my left shoulder and we walked towards the stairs..
"Olie."
"Hmm?"
"Do you have a problem?"
I looked at him puzzled and stopped walking down the stairs.. he stopped too and looked at me.. for the first time his face is serious..
"What do you mean?" He shrugged his shoulder and said..
"I don't know, you change this pass few days."
I raise my one eyebrows I really don't know what he was trying to say..
"You don't talk to much, and you want to be alone all day."
"Ohh.." I only said and started to walk down the stairs...
"What do you mean?" Oh I shrugged my shoulders and said.
"Nothing I just want to be alone and I'm too lazy to speak with someone." he only stared at me and shrugged his shoulder too..
"If you need someone to talk you can call me Olie you know that."
I smiled at him and hugged him that's what I loved with Ervix, he's always there for me and understands me. He hugged me back but not so long.. he looked at my eyes and smiled again..
"Olie is a big girl now" and he messed my hair with his hands..
"Hey! Stop it!" I jerked his hands away in my head and ran to his car.. he still was walking but laughing at me.. I can't tell him that I'm having a nightmare because for sure he only teased me and I know him he will sleep at my room and said that he will take away my bad dreams by punching it like what he always said when I was young..
He drove off at the bar where our band usually play.. we don't talk while he's driving and I just stared outside the window... he parked his car and got outside, I grabbed my guitar at the back seat and we walked inside the bar...
We saw our band mate sitting on the table at the side of the bar.. I saw Linor our Adlib guitarist tuning his precious guitar, and his side Ruviel our drummer wiping a rag his drumstick, and Warren our keyboardist sitting pretty at the couch while his two feet up in the table.. we are all vampires in our band but I'm different because I'm half breed.. my elder brother Feliex told me the whole story and told me that I got that four different types of blood, I'm still curious about who I really am. But I'm happy now and satisfied with my family even I had a enemy brother.. he's Ervix..
"Hey guys" Ervix said when we are getting near at them..
"Hey!" they all said and give a high five with Ervix, they all looked at me and I only nodded my head with them..I rolled my eyes at the bar, and the bar almost full of people who always went here to hangout.. drink, and make fun.. I looked at my right side where the bar was and I saw a guy sitting and had his drink in his hand.. he is facing at the bartender so I can't see his face, I don't know how long I stared at him but I noticed that he is looking at me now..
I didn't stop gazing at him and he also did at me... we liked this for so long when I remember the color of his eyes.. it's blue! Like the eyes of the man in my nightmare but the difference is his eyes is no sadness or regrets but I saw a irritating eyes looking at me..
Is he feeling irritated at me? Then I felt my heart started to beat faster again.. and I heard it's sound like a drum of Ruveil.. damn my human heart!
"What is wrong with me?
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Comment Replies:
Ok people I will start my story now.. but don't judge it bad already, it's not yet in the climax where it most interesting I think haha.. just keep on reading and you'll see it goes much fun in the upcoming more part. I really appreciate if you guys leave comment and I don't mind if you give me some bad comment because it will help me to improve it.. your opinion is important for me..:) but if you leave better comments, then it's good haha.. I only wrote the first part 3 because I want to let you know how she had a vamp and wolf blood, that's why it's like in hurry and the conversation is not so much serious..(sorry)
I would like to thank my one commenter in my part 2, I didn't thank you in my part 3 of it.. so here it is.. Thanks to:
Aj P - Thanks thanks for commenting and saying my story is awesome hehe..
And to my 2nd commenters of part 3:
Pranjal - Hehe.. you rock too! Lolx.. so sorry for my part 3.. I will do your advice thanks! I'm in hurry when I wrote part 3 eh..:) Thanks hope you always give me advice.. It's my first time writing a story.
Alejandra - Thanks thanks!
I was standing in the darkness and I can't see anything except pure darkness, I walked slowly turning my head left and right finding someone who can help me to get out of this darkness...
I stopped walking when I saw a figure in front of me... I can't see the figure properly because of the darkness, but suddenly it went clearly in my vision and I saw a man standing back at me..
I thought he's my brother Ervix so I ran towards him,when I got near him I grabbed his left shoulder and turned him to face me.
"Ervix" I said smilingly but when the man turned to face me, I gasped and I removed my hand at his shoulder.. I stepped back away from him while his eyes staring at me.. my human heart beating so fast, when he started to walk slowly towards me.. I step back again every step he made to get near me...
"Who are you?" I asked him but he didn't answer me, I could only see her eyes because his face is almost cover of darkness.. then he raised up his right hand up to his head and the shinning silver sword appeared.
I can't barely move at my feet I was frozen when I saw the shinning sword at his hand. He stepped two more step towards me and I see closely his blue eyes full of sadness and regrets.
"You need to die" he said with a cold voice and my eyes wide open when I saw that he will cut me by his sword..
Ring!!
I forced my eyes to open and quickly sat up... I breathed heavily and my heart beat is like a drum. I touched my forehead and it's full of sweat.. I breath heavily and sighed.. I turned my head at my still ringing alarm clock, 9:30 pm.. I pushed the button to stop it from ringing and I took off my blanket and walked to my closet, I grabbed my jeans and my white tanktop, I put it in my bed before I grabbed my towel and went take a good shower..
I can't believe in my dreams, I always dreamed that man who wanted to kill me, but he had a sadness and regrets in his eyes.. I sighed again and shook my head..
"Nightmare again."
After I took a shower and got dressed, put a little bit of make up and wore my flat white converse, I grabbed my guitar at the corner of my room and walked towards the door and closed it behind me..
I walked at the hallway when someone called me..
"Olie!"
I stopped walking and even I didn't turn my head, I knew who is it..
"Yeah" I turn my head to look at Ervix who always had his perfect smile on his lips.. he is my second eldest brother, he's 6'3, while I'm only 5'6, I looked so short every time my brother is standing beside me.. he's got gray eyes and a long black hair almost falling at his shoulder but it's always in bun. A pale skin and a he's got a pink lip with 1 piercing at his left lower lips... he is my best bud brother, and he is our Vocalist in our vampire band - night creepers- ( haha I can't think much perfect name for their band sowie) while I'm on the lead guitar but a second vocalist too..
"Wanna ride? He asked me.
"Hmm..." I pretend to think first..
"Comon! Don't think so long.."
"Ok!"
He smiled and I also smiled at him. He put his right hand at my left shoulder and we walked towards the stairs..
"Olie."
"Hmm?"
"Do you have a problem?"
I looked at him puzzled and stopped walking down the stairs.. he stopped too and looked at me.. for the first time his face is serious..
"What do you mean?" He shrugged his shoulder and said..
"I don't know, you change this pass few days."
I raise my one eyebrows I really don't know what he was trying to say..
"You don't talk to much, and you want to be alone all day."
"Ohh.." I only said and started to walk down the stairs...
"What do you mean?" Oh I shrugged my shoulders and said.
"Nothing I just want to be alone and I'm too lazy to speak with someone." he only stared at me and shrugged his shoulder too..
"If you need someone to talk you can call me Olie you know that."
I smiled at him and hugged him that's what I loved with Ervix, he's always there for me and understands me. He hugged me back but not so long.. he looked at my eyes and smiled again..
"Olie is a big girl now" and he messed my hair with his hands..
"Hey! Stop it!" I jerked his hands away in my head and ran to his car.. he still was walking but laughing at me.. I can't tell him that I'm having a nightmare because for sure he only teased me and I know him he will sleep at my room and said that he will take away my bad dreams by punching it like what he always said when I was young..
He drove off at the bar where our band usually play.. we don't talk while he's driving and I just stared outside the window... he parked his car and got outside, I grabbed my guitar at the back seat and we walked inside the bar...
We saw our band mate sitting on the table at the side of the bar.. I saw Linor our Adlib guitarist tuning his precious guitar, and his side Ruviel our drummer wiping a rag his drumstick, and Warren our keyboardist sitting pretty at the couch while his two feet up in the table.. we are all vampires in our band but I'm different because I'm half breed.. my elder brother Feliex told me the whole story and told me that I got that four different types of blood, I'm still curious about who I really am. But I'm happy now and satisfied with my family even I had a enemy brother.. he's Ervix..
"Hey guys" Ervix said when we are getting near at them..
"Hey!" they all said and give a high five with Ervix, they all looked at me and I only nodded my head with them..I rolled my eyes at the bar, and the bar almost full of people who always went here to hangout.. drink, and make fun.. I looked at my right side where the bar was and I saw a guy sitting and had his drink in his hand.. he is facing at the bartender so I can't see his face, I don't know how long I stared at him but I noticed that he is looking at me now..
I didn't stop gazing at him and he also did at me... we liked this for so long when I remember the color of his eyes.. it's blue! Like the eyes of the man in my nightmare but the difference is his eyes is no sadness or regrets but I saw a irritating eyes looking at me..
Is he feeling irritated at me? Then I felt my heart started to beat faster again.. and I heard it's sound like a drum of Ruveil.. damn my human heart!
"What is wrong with me?
==========================================
Comment Replies:
Ok people I will start my story now.. but don't judge it bad already, it's not yet in the climax where it most interesting I think haha.. just keep on reading and you'll see it goes much fun in the upcoming more part. I really appreciate if you guys leave comment and I don't mind if you give me some bad comment because it will help me to improve it.. your opinion is important for me..:) but if you leave better comments, then it's good haha.. I only wrote the first part 3 because I want to let you know how she had a vamp and wolf blood, that's why it's like in hurry and the conversation is not so much serious..(sorry)
I would like to thank my one commenter in my part 2, I didn't thank you in my part 3 of it.. so here it is.. Thanks to:
Aj P - Thanks thanks for commenting and saying my story is awesome hehe..
And to my 2nd commenters of part 3:
Pranjal - Hehe.. you rock too! Lolx.. so sorry for my part 3.. I will do your advice thanks! I'm in hurry when I wrote part 3 eh..:) Thanks hope you always give me advice.. It's my first time writing a story.
Alejandra - Thanks thanks!
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