Only If We Want

Please tell me what do you think?
If we were under the sun's heat
In a desert with bear feet
We would step on prickles
With on pain at all
And will reach the oasis before we fall

If we were living in an adventure tale
In the ocean of life we would sail
We will tower above the mountainous waves
We would role the wild waves without a fight
Before an end of a night

If we were asked to prove ourselves
We shouldn't hide behind the shelf
We would challenge the gravity
And make the apple fly
Before we get old and die

But
Only
If
We
Want
What do you think about it ?
Wow Amazing
I love it so much
I like it
Its good
Not bad
Nooooooooooooo Its not good
Ugly
Worse poem ever
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Published: 1/31/2011
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