One Last Moment

All of my poems are about death, suicide, love, vampires... I'd b so thankful if the people who read my poems left a comment about them... so that I could have an idea if my work is good enough... thx
My mind is confused, my heart is weak
Devoured in love, hate and rage
Every time I see your reflections I'm falling in too deep
With these shadows I'm caged

With a deep breath I cleared my thoughts
And let everything fall away
For my life will soon be better
Cause I'm dying on this day

I'm confused by my own logic
I lost more than gained from greed
The only tools that ease my pain
Are those which make me bleed

The time has come
There's no sense in looking back
The pain and anger are now gone
As everything fades to black
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