Nightbird

Just a description of a new story I'm working on. :) Comments and criticisms are more than welcome. It is kind of short xb -----------
He was to be the Hawk.
Until the Brotherhood clipped his wings.

And now, Jerick O'Brien is one of them, a Lord of Origion, yet another of Queen Annamarie's precious knights. As he climbs up the ranks, a shadow with no face has been angered by the Queen. How? No one has a clue. Who is this shadow?

She is known only as the Nightbird.
She has no face, only a lovely song.

Natalie Nightingale is pissed. It's as simple as that. While Queen Annamarie has her itsy bitsy dogs running wild looking for her, Natalie's planning something dark and brilliant. Something disastrous. And for some reason, she's sucking Jerick into it.

They already have a dark past.
Jerick isn't who he thinks he is.
And Natalie holds the key to it all.
What do you think so far?
Eh...
It is interesting
More!
Why is there just a description?!?!?
Lame
Stop writing
I kind of like the sound of it
It is alright
Doesn't tell me a thing about the story
What the heck...
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Published: 2/25/2011
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