New Story - Unsure.....
A story about a girl who lived in a small town. Everything was perfect in her old town. She had the greatest boyfriend, The best of the best friends. Awesome family and neighbors, What else does a girl need? But when she moves to L.A. everything changes. She doesn't even move into the nice neighborhoods of LA. She is horrified and trapped in her own personal hell.
*************AUTHOR NOTE******************
Hey you guys umm I was just thinking since not very many people liked my last story 'As Life Goes On'. So I decided to stop the story and try out a new one. I'm still not sure what I should call this one story, so I just picked the first title that came to my mind. I would be grateful thought if you all could help me with the title. Anyway I hope you enjoy this story better than the last. Tell me what you think :)
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Hey my name is Lucy Norah Kimble. I am seventeen years old and I live in a small town Called Chilmark. Chilmark was the best town a girl could ask for. Everything there Was Perfect. My friends- Kathy, Brandon, Jerome, Rebecca, and Gregg- are the most reliable, trusting, and funniest friends I Ever Knew. My boyfriend is the best guy in the town. His name is Darrin. Darrin has cute curly brown hair and gorgeous sea blue eyes. Darrin is the sweetest guy I Know, he comforts me when I need attention, he actually listens when I talk, and every time he sees me he gives me flowers, my favorite kind, orchids.
And my favorite part of Chilmark is my family. Every single person in my family lives there. My Aunt Peggy, Uncle Richard, Momma, Daddy, Grandma Nellie, Grandpa Kevin, Auntie Wendy, Uncle Joe, Grammy Rita, Granddad Harold, My cousins Kelly, Julian, Buddy, Samual, Tammy, baby Carrie, and our pets Timmy-the turtle-, Marian- the fat cat-, and Vivian-the puppy-. But of course I Couldn't possibly forget about my little sister, Millie. Life was perfect, I was getting Along with my family and my friends, schoolmates, and neighbors. I was IMing Kathy when my mother came into my room.
Kathy: AHahaha ya I kno! i feel so sorry for Manny though. It was his first time on a skateboard. It wasn't rite of every1 2 make fun of him. I looked over my shoulder my mother was there. Me: u was just lafing a min. ago though! lol but ya ur rite. Listen my mom just walked in my room I gtg. c u l8r. I signed off and looked at my mom. 'Yes?' I asked wondering what my momma wanted. I gave her a quizzical look and swiveled around in my chair. I got up and walked over towards her. 'Well.....' uh oh she had that 'you're not going to like what I'm going to say next look'.
I braced myself for the bad news. 'You know how your dad and I have been struggling with money, right?' 'Uh huh.' 'Well I found this job that pays a little more than the last job, and I talked this over with your father, and he and I think it's a great idea that we move, so I can work.' 'What??? How could you?!?!?!? My life gets good and you both have to take away my friends, my family, and most especially my boyfriend!!!! I'm not going!''Honey, please don't freak out, you don't even know where we are going.'
'I could care less where we are going! I just want to be with my boyfriend, and friends, and family! Why are you taking this away from me? Why mom why?' I started crying. Stupid mom making me cry and feel weak, and making us move. I walked over to my bed and buried my face in a pillow.
AUTHOR NOTE (AGAIN)
Sorry for the poor ending, my computer is being slow and I don't have enough patients to deal with it. *SORRY*
Hey you guys umm I was just thinking since not very many people liked my last story 'As Life Goes On'. So I decided to stop the story and try out a new one. I'm still not sure what I should call this one story, so I just picked the first title that came to my mind. I would be grateful thought if you all could help me with the title. Anyway I hope you enjoy this story better than the last. Tell me what you think :)
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Hey my name is Lucy Norah Kimble. I am seventeen years old and I live in a small town Called Chilmark. Chilmark was the best town a girl could ask for. Everything there Was Perfect. My friends- Kathy, Brandon, Jerome, Rebecca, and Gregg- are the most reliable, trusting, and funniest friends I Ever Knew. My boyfriend is the best guy in the town. His name is Darrin. Darrin has cute curly brown hair and gorgeous sea blue eyes. Darrin is the sweetest guy I Know, he comforts me when I need attention, he actually listens when I talk, and every time he sees me he gives me flowers, my favorite kind, orchids.
And my favorite part of Chilmark is my family. Every single person in my family lives there. My Aunt Peggy, Uncle Richard, Momma, Daddy, Grandma Nellie, Grandpa Kevin, Auntie Wendy, Uncle Joe, Grammy Rita, Granddad Harold, My cousins Kelly, Julian, Buddy, Samual, Tammy, baby Carrie, and our pets Timmy-the turtle-, Marian- the fat cat-, and Vivian-the puppy-. But of course I Couldn't possibly forget about my little sister, Millie. Life was perfect, I was getting Along with my family and my friends, schoolmates, and neighbors. I was IMing Kathy when my mother came into my room.
Kathy: AHahaha ya I kno! i feel so sorry for Manny though. It was his first time on a skateboard. It wasn't rite of every1 2 make fun of him. I looked over my shoulder my mother was there. Me: u was just lafing a min. ago though! lol but ya ur rite. Listen my mom just walked in my room I gtg. c u l8r. I signed off and looked at my mom. 'Yes?' I asked wondering what my momma wanted. I gave her a quizzical look and swiveled around in my chair. I got up and walked over towards her. 'Well.....' uh oh she had that 'you're not going to like what I'm going to say next look'.
I braced myself for the bad news. 'You know how your dad and I have been struggling with money, right?' 'Uh huh.' 'Well I found this job that pays a little more than the last job, and I talked this over with your father, and he and I think it's a great idea that we move, so I can work.' 'What??? How could you?!?!?!? My life gets good and you both have to take away my friends, my family, and most especially my boyfriend!!!! I'm not going!''Honey, please don't freak out, you don't even know where we are going.'
'I could care less where we are going! I just want to be with my boyfriend, and friends, and family! Why are you taking this away from me? Why mom why?' I started crying. Stupid mom making me cry and feel weak, and making us move. I walked over to my bed and buried my face in a pillow.
AUTHOR NOTE (AGAIN)
Sorry for the poor ending, my computer is being slow and I don't have enough patients to deal with it. *SORRY*
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